Tere sitam se boseedah……Sahal.

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                 Tere sitam se boseedah……Sahal.

Tere sitam Se boseedah hoker,
Sitamger apne zakhm dekhte hai,

Teri yaadon ko banake marham,
Bewafa apne zakhm sekhte hai.

karte the jo naaz apni muhabbat per,
aaj unke honsle bhi kham dekhte hai.

Ranjishon ko banake apna humsaya,
Muskurake apne karam dekhte hai.

Leker chale jo hame gunaah ke janib,
Aise badnuma apne kadam dekhte hai.

Sukoon yahan mayeser kahan tumhe “Sahal”,
Muskurahat mein bhi ashq-e-nam dekhte hai.

Boseedah=kharab/decayed,
Badnuma=badsurat.
Kham= kamzor.
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2013, 09:31:53 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2013, 09:42:20 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2013, 11:33:28 AM »
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woooooooow sahal. bahut khoob. waise yeh kiske sitam ke geet gaa rahe ho. beautiful keep writing. dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2013, 11:40:50 AM »
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woooooooow sahal. bahut khoob. waise yeh kiske sitam ke geet gaa rahe ho. beautiful keep writing. dheron daad
Thankyou ! Aqsh ji......sitamgar sitam kar ke chala gaya...
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2013, 12:17:44 PM »
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bohat chchhe hain..ji  Applause Applause
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Quote from: sahal on February 06, 2013, 08:52:08 AM
           
                 Tere sitam se boseedah……Sahal.

Tere sitam Se boseedah hoker,
Sitamger apne zakhm dekhte hai,

Teri yaadon ko banake marham,
Bewafa apne zakhm sekhte hai.

karte the jo naaz apni muhabbat per,
aaj unke honsle bhi kham dekhte hai.

Ranjishon ko banake apna humsaya,
Muskurake apne karam dekhte hai.

Leker chale jo hame gunaah ke janib,
Aise badnuma apne kadam dekhte hai.

Sukoon yahan mayeser kahan tumhe “Sahal”,
Muskurahat mein bhi ashq-e-nam dekhte hai.

Boseedah=kharab/decayed,
Badnuma=badsurat.
Kham= kamzor.


bahut bahut khoob..........!
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2013, 01:09:16 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on February 06, 2013, 01:03:51 PM

bahut bahut khoob..........!
Thankyou ! sheba ji.
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2013, 06:00:41 PM »
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Bahut hi umda kalaam

Sukoon yahan mayeser kahan tumhe “Sahal”,
Muskurahat mein bhi ashq-e-nam dekhte hai. ..behatreen...
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ultimate..
wondeful..
awesome..
outstanding..

could you please tell me the meaning of bosheedah??
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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2013, 05:01:14 AM »
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Bahut hi umda kalaam

Sukoon yahan mayeser kahan tumhe “Sahal”,
Muskurahat mein bhi ashq-e-nam dekhte hai. ..behatreen...


Thankyou ! mukesh ji..
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«Reply #11 on: February 07, 2013, 05:03:21 AM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on February 06, 2013, 06:22:44 PM
ultimate..
wondeful..
awesome..
outstanding..

could you please tell me the meaning of bosheedah??
Thankyou ! ;lovely
boseedah ka meaning poetry ke neeche likha hai,,
waise boseedah ka matlab hota hai ,,kharab ya khokla,,,...
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ok .. m sorry maine dhyan nahi diya.. thank you sahal ji
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«Reply #13 on: February 08, 2013, 04:16:08 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: February 09, 2013, 07:01:25 AM »
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ok .. m sorry maine dhyan nahi diya.. thank you sahal ji
SORRY KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI LOVELY
U R WELCOME ANYTIME,,,
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