teri bewafai----Ritesh modi

by Ritesh Modi on December 03, 2012, 06:53:54 PM
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Shamshaan ka ye aalam bhi dekh te rahe,
Apne armaano ko lut te dekh te rahe,

Dil se behte khoon mein tezaab ko berdaast kiya,
Dil ke aashiyane ko tujhe jala ta dekh berdaast kiya,

Meri mohabbat ki umeed ka housla toh dekho,
Teri choukhat pe rahi meri nazar umr bhar dekho,

Himmat meri ke nilaam khud ko kiya,
Thi tum bewafa lekin badnaam khud ko kiya,

Hu mitti ke niche aur aankhein bhi hai band,
Lekin teri surat abh bhi dikh rahi mand-mand…….
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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2012, 07:17:34 PM »
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nice bhaiya//.. magar apki second line mein khoon nahi jam raha... m sorry if m wrong m just telling you what i felt..
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2012, 07:19:36 PM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on December 03, 2012, 07:17:34 PM
nice bhaiya//.. magar apki second line mein khoon nahi jam raha... m sorry if m wrong m just telling you what i felt..
thank you jeet aap ne kuch suggest kiya,
how about
"apne armaano ko lut ta dekh te rahe"
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2012, 08:31:06 PM »
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haan i feel thik hai yeh Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: December 04, 2012, 01:43:51 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #5 on: December 04, 2012, 03:45:42 AM »
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Quote from: prashad on December 04, 2012, 01:43:51 AM
very nice
thank you
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«Reply #6 on: December 04, 2012, 04:23:16 AM »
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acha hai ritesh ji likhte raha karo
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«Reply #7 on: December 04, 2012, 04:31:02 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on December 04, 2012, 04:23:16 AM
acha hai ritesh ji likhte raha karo
thank you ji, koshish kerta rahunga...
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«Reply #8 on: December 04, 2012, 05:04:27 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: December 04, 2012, 05:54:42 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 04, 2012, 05:04:27 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 04, 2012, 05:57:01 AM »
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 Applause
 bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: December 04, 2012, 06:03:04 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 04, 2012, 05:57:01 AM
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«Reply #12 on: December 04, 2012, 06:07:45 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: December 04, 2012, 06:21:29 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 04, 2012, 06:07:45 AM
bahut khoob
thank you...
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«Reply #14 on: December 04, 2012, 10:11:14 AM »
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bahut bahut khooob
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