Teri chaukhat pe mera dam nikal jaye to maza aajaye !!

by abdulqadeer on January 24, 2009, 03:50:59 AM
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Ye ghazal maine kissi ki farmaesh pe likhi hai agar pasand ajaye to nawaz dena !!


Meri mahobbath ka ye sila mil jaye to maza aajaye !!
Teri chaukhat pe mera dam nikal jaye to maza aajaye !!
Hayat-a-tangdasti pe meri hasna teri fitrat si rahi hai !!
Ab meri maiyath pe muskura ke chala jaye to maza aajaye !!

Mujhe raatoon me jagana teri adath si rahi ta-umra !!
Mai sota rahoon qabar me aur teri neend udjaye to maza aajaye !!

Zindagi ki har rah pe tone mujhe gumrah kiya !!
Manzil tere samne ho aur tu raasta bhatak jaye to maza aajaye !!

Meri ghazaloon ko nawazne ka usse saliqa hi na aya kabhi !!
Kissi din mai qadardan aur wo shayar bann jaye to maza aajaye !!

Meri surath se unhe nafrath si rahi hai hamesha Qadeer !!
Kafan me lipta ho mera chahera aur noor bhikar jaye to maza aajaye !!

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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2009, 04:22:33 AM »
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kya baat hai...qadeer ji.....bahut dard bara likha hai.......

jab bhi tera haath maanga, har mehafil mein,tune mera majaak udaye,
jiska haath tu chaha rahi hai,wo hi tuje thookrae majaa ya jaaye.

jis ke ishq mein tu jee rahi hai,wo hi tuje mil na paaye,aur to mar jaaye,
aaj  jo kabar mili hai tere khatir,uske baju mein teri kabar banjaaye,aur tuje dekhkar hastaa rahu  majaa aajaye.
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2009, 04:32:23 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 24, 2009, 04:22:33 AM
kya baat hai...qadeer ji.....bahut dard bara likha hai.......

jab bhi tera haath maanga, har mehafil mein,tune mera majaak udaye,
jiska haath tu chaha rahi hai,wo hi tuje thookrae majaa ya jaaye.

jis ke ishq mein tu jee rahi hai,wo hi tuje mil na paaye,aur to mar jaaye,
aaj  jo kabar mili hai tere khatir,uske baju mein teri kabar banjaaye,aur tuje dekhkar hastaa rahu  majaa aajaye.




Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Cara Ji !! Aur apne ne bhi kamal likha hai !!

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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2009, 06:03:03 AM »
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abdulqadeer ji!
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Tasawwur kaa khaasey kamaal kaa isteymaal kiyaa hai aapney! Aapke 'woh' lagtaa hai khaasey 'sadistic' dil-o-dimaag key hain? Aisey logon key liye qurbaangee kaa jazbah bhi bey-asar hi rahtaa hai, janaab! Better worship the life, and live it thoroughly! Optimism makes the life more meaningful than passimism!
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«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2009, 06:35:43 AM »
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waah waah!! qadeer ji...bahut khoob likha hai aapne...
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«Reply #5 on: January 24, 2009, 06:42:25 AM »
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Wah! Kya baat hai Qadeer Ji
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne
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«Reply #6 on: January 24, 2009, 06:58:42 AM »
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Subhan Allah,.
Subhan Allah,.

Kya Kahoon Bhai,.
Jawaab Nahi,.

Baar Baasr Aisi Ghazlein Aap Hume Pardhaa Do, To Mazaa Aa Jaaye,.
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2009, 07:14:37 AM »
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Quote from: fairy2633 on January 24, 2009, 06:35:43 AM
waah waah!! qadeer ji...bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

Shukiyra janab apne izzath di hamare kalam ko ahesan hai apka fairy ji !!

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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2009, 07:27:01 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 24, 2009, 06:03:03 AM
abdulqadeer ji!
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Tasawwur kaa khaasey kamaal kaa isteymaal kiyaa hai aapney! Aapke 'woh' lagtaa hai khaasey 'sadistic' dil-o-dimaag key hain? Aisey logon key liye qurbaangee kaa jazbah bhi bey-asar hi rahtaa hai, janaab! Better worship the life, and live it thoroughly! Optimism makes the life more meaningful than passimism!
               - abd bundeli

Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Janab Ghazal tak pahonchne ka aur apne to Ghazal ka ahesas padliya Abd ji !! ahesand mandhai apke jo apne is nacheez ki ghazal pe miyari dali aur nawaza !! ap jaise shayaroon ki hausla afza-e- bahoth ma-e-ne rakhti hai janab !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2009, 08:14:22 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 24, 2009, 06:42:25 AM
Wah! Kya baat hai Qadeer Ji
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne

Bahoth bahoth Shukriya Rajesh ji apne hamari ghazal ko waqat diya !!

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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2009, 08:36:57 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 24, 2009, 06:58:42 AM
Subhan Allah,.
Subhan Allah,.

Kya Kahoon Bhai,.
Jawaab Nahi,.

Baar Baasr Aisi Ghazlein Aap Hume Pardhaa Do, To Mazaa Aa Jaaye,.

Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Azeem Is nacheez ko tumne itni izzath bakshi aur bade bhai ka darja diya !! Allah tumhe khush o qurram rakhe !! Ameen

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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2009, 09:10:29 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 24, 2009, 07:27:01 AM
Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Janab Ghazal tak pahonchne ka aur apne to Ghazal ka ahesas padliya Abd ji !! ahesand mandhai apke jo apne is nacheez ki ghazal pe miyari dali aur nawaza !! ap jaise shayaroon ki hausla afza-e- bahoth ma-e-ne rakhti hai janab !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #12 on: January 24, 2009, 09:11:17 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 24, 2009, 08:40:14 AM
Wah Qadeer Bhai Sach Mein Koi Lafz Nahi Hai
Mein Kya Tareef Karu Bas Kuch Apna Sa Mehsoos Hua Ise Padkar
Bas Bhai Yun Hi Likhte Rahe Aap Aur Hum Sikhte Rahe..Khush Raho Bhai.



Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya janab Itni Izzat de rahe hai app sub log ke meri qalam machalne lagi hai kalam likhne ke liye !! Allah hum sub ko khush rakhe !! Ameen

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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2009, 09:39:06 AM »
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Bohat khoob abdul ji.... Thumbs UP

Bohat khoob shihab... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2009, 10:16:40 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 24, 2009, 09:39:06 AM
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Bohat khoob abdul ji.... Thumbs UP

Bohat khoob shihab... Thumbs UP

Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Janab Honeyrose Ji Apne is nacheez ki ghazal ko waqath diya !!

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