Teri chaukhat pe mera dam nikal jaye to maza aajaye !!

by abdulqadeer on January 24, 2009, 03:50:59 AM
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«Reply #30 on: January 25, 2009, 05:09:08 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 24, 2009, 02:50:43 PM
Raaste Khud Hi Tabaahi Ke Nikaale Humne,.
Kar Diya Dil Kisi Patthar Ke Hawaale Humne,.

Humko Maloom Nahi Kya Shay Hai Mohabbat Logon,.
Apna Ghar Phoonk Ke Dekhein Hain Ujaale Humne,.

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Bahoth Ache Azeem !! Likte raho yunhi

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«Reply #31 on: January 25, 2009, 05:37:46 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Saheb..Maafi chahunga,waqt ki Mashurifiyat ki wajeh se der se jawaab de raha Hoon..par vyakai mein,bahut khoob nazam pesh ki hai aapne..

Bahut Khoob Azeem bro..
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«Reply #32 on: January 25, 2009, 07:05:01 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 25, 2009, 05:37:46 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Saheb..Maafi chahunga,waqt ki Mashurifiyat ki wajeh se der se jawaab de raha Hoon..par vyakai mein,bahut khoob nazam pesh ki hai aapne..

Bahut Khoob Azeem bro..

Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya janab ahesan mandh hain apki is tarif ke liye hum !! ye kya kuwesh ji isme maafi ki kaunsi baath hai janab !! Apne waqath nikal ke hamari ghazal padli yahi bahoth hai janab !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #33 on: January 25, 2009, 07:07:35 AM »
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kya baat hai qadeer sahab aapki kalam ne kayal kar diya bekarar ko......bahoot sunder.....
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«Reply #34 on: January 25, 2009, 07:33:40 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 25, 2009, 07:07:35 AM
kya baat hai qadeer sahab aapki kalam ne kayal kar diya bekarar ko......bahoot sunder.....

Shukriya Janab ye app jaise logon ka badath pan hai sajeev ji jo hamare Qalam ko tarif se nawazte rahete hain !! Allah sub ko Qairde de bhai Ameen !!

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«Reply #35 on: January 25, 2009, 08:14:35 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on January 24, 2009, 08:12:41 PM
wah wah wah wah...bahaaut khoob...kitni khubsoorati se likha hai apne...



uske kadmon main mera dam nikle toh maza ajaye,
mere labon uske lab miljaye toh maza ajaye...

kisi bewaffa ko bewaffai ki saza mile toh maza ajaye,
hum Qadeer ji jaisa likh sake toh maza ajaye...

"Rahim" ko bas ek dildar hi nahin mila is jahan main,
hume khuda ki tarha chahne wala koi ashir miljaye toh maza ajaye...


Bahoth Shukriya janab Hamari Ghazal Ko nawazne ke liye !! Aur Wah Apke ashar me is nacheez ka naam naam ho isse badi izzath kya hosakti hai mere liye !! Allah Sub ko Qair de !!

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«Reply #36 on: January 25, 2009, 08:20:34 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 25, 2009, 08:14:35 AM
Bahoth Shukriya janab Hamari Ghazal Ko nawazne ke liye !! Aur Wah Apke ashar me is nacheez ka naam naam ho isse badi izzath kya hosakti hai mere liye !! Allah Sub ko Qair de !!

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arey apka naam toh ana hi hai kyun ki apne itni achi ghazal jo pesh ki...Allah Sub ko Qair de!!!
 
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«Reply #37 on: January 25, 2009, 10:03:37 AM »
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arey apka naam toh ana hi hai kyun ki apne itni achi ghazal jo pesh ki...Allah Sub ko Qair de!!!
 

Shukriya Janab Nawazish ka !!

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«Reply #38 on: January 25, 2009, 01:23:08 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 24, 2009, 08:44:58 AM
Azab Sa Dard Mehsoos Hota Hai Hume Teri Baton Mein
Padte Hi Aankh Bhar Aayi Kya Kamaal Hai Teri Baton Mein

Shihab Ji Apke is ashar me ne azab kaha hai ya ajab kaha hai zara pata den to maherbani hogi janab !!

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«Reply #39 on: January 25, 2009, 01:51:00 PM »
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waah kya likha hai..
bohot hi dard hai, par vyang ke saath likha hai..
padh kar dill mein tiss si lagi...
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«Reply #40 on: January 25, 2009, 01:54:44 PM »
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Quote from: afreen_madhu on January 25, 2009, 01:51:00 PM
waah kya likha hai..
bohot hi dard hai, par vyang ke saath likha hai..
padh kar dill mein tiss si lagi...

Shukriya janab Itna To samajh gaye hum ke app hamare Kalaam ki tarif kar rahi hain magar ye zara samjh me nahi aya "Par Vyang ke saath Likha hai " iska matalb samjhane ki zahemath karnege app !! Allah ap khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #41 on: January 25, 2009, 02:35:45 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 25, 2009, 01:54:44 PM
Shukriya janab Itna To samajh gaye hum ke app hamare Kalaam ki tarif kar rahi hain magar ye zara samjh me nahi aya "Par Vyang ke saath Likha hai " iska matalb samjhane ki zahemath karnege app !! Allah ap khush rakhe !!

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Apne kaha ki agar acha lage toh nawaz dena..
yeh ek vyayang ki baat hui..chunki apko toh pata hona chahiye ki app ek umda shayar hai..par phir yeh likhna ki pasand aye..
yeh thoda vyangyatamak hua na..

( Wht I menna say is, tht u hav kept up the zany humour too..U hav written it so beautifully, tht all the pain's clearly visible buh still in such a way tht it doesn't give a pure sullen expressions, buh a lot mre..)

I hpe u understand..kabhi kabhi likhne mein galti ho jati hai..hum abb bhi, aur tab bhi app ko nawaz rahe the...

P.S: Sowie cudn't reply to PM..gotta make 30 posts first, buh em lil choosy..won't read ny oder post..thus..it'll take time..Hpe u understand..
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«Reply #42 on: January 25, 2009, 03:02:40 PM »
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Quote from: afreen_madhu on January 25, 2009, 02:35:45 PM
Apne kaha ki agar acha lage toh nawaz dena..
yeh ek vyayang ki baat hui..chunki apko toh pata hona chahiye ki app ek umda shayar hai..par phir yeh likhna ki pasand aye..
yeh thoda vyangyatamak hua na..

( Wht I menna say is, tht u hav kept up the zany humour too..U hav written it so beautifully, tht all the pain's clearly visible buh still in such a way tht it doesn't give a pure sullen expressions, buh a lot mre..)

I hpe u understand..kabhi kabhi likhne mein galti ho jati hai..hum abb bhi, aur tab bhi app ko nawaz rahe the...

P.S: Sowie cudn't reply to PM..gotta make 30 posts first, buh em lil choosy..won't read ny oder post..thus..it'll take time..Hpe u understand..

Zahenashin zahenashin janab ahesan mand hain hum apke !! jo apne is haqeeq shayar ki shayari ko nawaza !!

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«Reply #43 on: January 26, 2009, 08:11:57 AM »
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P.S: Sowie cudn't reply to PM..gotta make 30 posts first, buh em lil choosy..won't read ny oder post..thus..it'll take time..Hpe u understand..
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Koi baath nahi janab !! Aur eak baar ahesan mandh kardiya apne hame !!

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«Reply #44 on: January 29, 2009, 07:57:41 AM »
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uske kadmon main mera dam nikle toh maza ajaye,
mere labon uske lab miljaye toh maza ajaye...

kisi bewaffa ko bewaffai ki saza mile toh maza ajaye,
hum Qadeer ji jaisa likh sake toh maza ajaye...

"Rahim" ko bas ek dildar hi nahin mila is jahan main,
hume khuda ki tarha chahne wala koi ashir miljaye toh maza ajaye...

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Bahoth qoob janab maza agaya !! Allah apko khush rakhe !!

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