~~Teri Meharbaaniyan~~

by majid on April 20, 2010, 06:39:27 PM
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  Jab Se Hui Tujhsey Aey Sang Dil Mulaqaat Hai
Mat Puch Kis Qadar Uljhi Tabse Meri Hayaat Hai.
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Is Qadar Koi Teer  Sa Mere Dil  Ke Paar  Hua Hai
Jabsey Tera  Gairon Se  Irtibat Aey Yaar Hua Hai.
 
Koi Bhi  Mausam Raas  Aata Nahi Is Pagal Dil  Ko
Aey Sang Dil , Jabsey Yeh Tera  Bimaar Hua Hai.

Kuch  Yun  Uljha Rahi  Hain  Aajkal  Bechainiyan
Aur Jaise  Lehja  Lehja  Bas , Beqaraar  Hua Hai.
 
Jo Kabhi Karta  Tha Teri Chahton  Pe Naaz Bada
Aaj Wohi  Teri Jafaaon Se  Sharamsaar Hua Hai.
 
Bata Ye Teri Meharbaaniyan Nahi To Kya Hai, Ki
Bhari Dunya Men Koi,Tanhaai Ka Shikar Hua Hai.


Irtibat...Meljol


                 ~Shihab~
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2010, 07:03:12 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat Ghazal likhi hai aapne... maine kaha tha ki mujhe aapki agli peshkash ka intezar rahega ... aur mujhe yakeen tha ki intzaar ka fal bahut meetha hoga aur wahi hua... Shihab ji aapne bahut hi sundar shabdon me dard ko kaagaz pe utaara hai... bahut khoob Shihab ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2010, 08:05:13 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Shihab ji,.heart touching and mindblowing creation.mujhe hamesha aapke poem ka intezaar raheta hai.keep up the good work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2010, 08:32:34 PM »
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Waah shihab ji bahut hi khoob likha hai..dard ka bahut khubsurat roop pesh kiya hai apne...per smjh nhi aaya ki apne apne naam k baad laughing smily kyun add kar diya??
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2010, 09:54:12 AM »
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Shihab Bhai, hasb-e-mamool ek nayi takhleeq aapne pesh ki hai jo mujhe bahot pasand aai. Isme ye lines khas taur par achhi lagi:

Koi B Mausam Raas Aata Nahi Is Pagal Dil Ko
Aey Sang Dil Jabse Yeh Tera Bimaar Hua Hai.

Kuch Yun Uljha Rahi Hain Aajkal Bechainiyan
Aur Jaise Lehja Lehja Bas, Beqaraar Hua Hai.

Marhaba Shihab bhai. Khush Rahiye.
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2010, 10:03:31 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah.....

Bahut Bahut Khoob Majid Bhai...

Kisi Bechain Aashiq Ka Kya Khoob Haal-e-Dil Bayaan Kiya Hai Aapne..

Har Ek sher Lajawab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2010, 08:34:33 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 21, 2010, 03:14:06 PM
Zahe Naseeb,
Badi Khushi Hui Jaankar Ki Aapne Pasand Farmaya
Mere Lafzon Pe To Nikhar Bas Aap Sabke Dekhne Se Hi Aata Hai.Khair
Bahut Bahut Shukariya Geet Sahiba Pasand Farmane Aur Himmat Afzaii Ke Liye
Aapka Tahe Dil Se Mashkur Hun Ki Aapne Apna Waqt Diya..Bahut Shukariya...

Aur Ji Main Khud Nahi Janta Yeh Kaise Add Ho Gaya
Khair Mafi Chahta Hun..Main Abhi Edit Kiye Deta Hun

Umeed Karta Hun Aage Bhi Yun Hi Inayat Banaye Rakhenge Aap..!


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

Shukriya tou apke hai shihab ji jo apneitne pyare alfaz hamare beech share kiye...aap yu hi likhte rahiye aur hum apka likha yu hi pasand karte rahenge..aur shihab ji maafi ki koi zarurat nhi kabhi galti se ho jata hai...take cre...
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2010, 09:25:46 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 20, 2010, 06:39:27 PM
  Jabse Hui Tujhse Aey Sang Dil Mulakaat Hai.
Mat Puch Kis Qadar Uljhi Tabse Meri Hayaat Hai.
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Is Qadar Koi Teer Sa Mere Dil Ke Paar Hua Hai
Jabse Tera Gairon Se Irtibat Aey Yaar Hua Hai.
 
Koi B Mausam Raas Aata Nahi Is Pagal Dil Ko
Aey Sang Dil Jabse Yeh Tera Bimaar Hua Hai.

Kuch Yun Uljha Rahi Hain Aajkal Bechainiyan
Aur Jaise Lehja Lehja Bas, Beqaraar Hua Hai.
 
Jo Kabhi Karta Tha Teri Chahton Pe Naaz Bada
Aaj Wohi Teri Jafaaon Se Sharamsaar Hua Hai.
 
Bata Ye Teri Meharbaaniyan Nahi To Kya Hai, Ki
Bhari Dunya Men Koi,Tanhaai Ka Shikar Hua Hai.


Irtibat...Meljol


                 ~Shihab~

Bohat khub Shihab ji...awesome amezing very touchy... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2010, 06:07:58 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: September 24, 2010, 04:15:04 AM »
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Baapre Itna Saara Dard
Kisne Tod Diya Aakhir Tera Dil Is Qadar?
Waise Likha Bohat Hi Achha Hai Yaar

Khush Raho.
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