Todd diya ab bharam................PWFS

by pankajwfs on September 01, 2012, 05:05:35 AM
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Lo todd diya ab bharam unke aane ka,
Ab chahe jo ho anjaam is fasaane ka.

Is janam me na sahi agley me milenge,
Kya andaza lagauN tere is bahaane ka.

Karte hain tanha basar ab viraane me,
Khub sila diya hai khwaab sajaane ka.

Gair ke pehlu me aur nazar meri taraf,
Bahut khoob hai andaaz dil jalaane ka.  

Shamma to shaan hotee hai mehfiloN ki,
Koun puchey hai haal kisi parwaane ka.

Hum na samjh paaye fitrat teri 'pankaj',
Khub seekha hai dastoor is jamaane ka.


(PWFS - 01/09/2012)
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2012, 07:40:16 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Pankaj ji....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2012, 07:50:46 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2012, 09:57:44 AM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on September 01, 2012, 05:05:35 AM

Lo todd diya ab bharam unke aane ka,
Ab chahe jo ho anjaam is fasaane ka.

Is janam me na sahi agley me milenge,
Kya andaza lagauN tere is bahaane ka.

Karte hain tanha basar ab viraane me,
Khub sila diya hai khwaab sajaane ka.

Gair ke pehlu me aur nazar meri taraf,
Bahut khoob hai andaaz dil jalaane ka.   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley 

Shamma to shaan hotee hai mehfiloN ki,
Koun puchey hai haal kisi parwaane ka. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Hum na samjh paaye fitrat teri 'pankaj',
Khub seekha hai dastoor is jamaane ka.


(PWFS - 01/09/2012)



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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2012, 01:43:39 PM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on September 01, 2012, 05:05:35 AM

Lo todd diya ab bharam unke aane ka,
Ab chahe jo ho anjaam is fasaane ka.  Applause Applause Bahut khoob

Is janam me na sahi agley me milenge,
Kya andaza lagauN tere is bahaane ka.  Applause Kuch pata nahee bhai

Karte hain tanha basar ab viraane me,
Khub sila diya hai khwaab sajaane ka.   Applause Applause Applause wah waahhh

Gair ke pehlu me aur nazar meri taraf,
Bahut khoob hai andaaz dil jalaane ka.    Thumbs UP Mast hai.. icon_silent sad11

Shamma to shaan hotee hai mehfiloN ki,
Koun puchey hai haal kisi parwaane ka.  Applause Applause bahut badhiya

Hum na samjh paaye fitrat teri 'pankaj',
Khub seekha hai dastoor is jamaane ka.   Applause Applause Kya baat hai


(PWFS - 01/09/2012)

Bahut sundar ur damdaar ghazal hai pankaj bhaai,
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2012, 03:43:39 PM »
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bahut sunder bahut hi badhiya lajawab aur umda rachna... hazaro daad aur mubarakbaad pankaj ji

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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2012, 09:42:41 PM »
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bahot bahot khoob likha hai aapne Pankaj ji
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 01, 2012, 07:40:16 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Pankaj ji....!!!

Hriday ji bahut bahut sukriya................
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 01, 2012, 07:50:46 AM
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NBand ji bahut bahut sukriya...........
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2012, 03:13:28 AM »
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Pankaj Ji Bahut Umda Gazal Kahi Hai Aapne
Har Sher Lajawaab Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2012, 09:00:14 AM »
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waah waah Pankaj ji kyaa aashaawaadi drihtikone hai dheron daad
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 01, 2012, 09:57:44 AM

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«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2012, 11:15:45 AM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on September 01, 2012, 05:05:35 AM

Lo todd diya ab bharam unke aane ka,
Ab chahe jo ho anjaam is fasaane ka.

Is janam me na sahi agley me milenge,
Kya andaza lagauN tere is bahaane ka.

Karte hain tanha basar ab viraane me,
Khub sila diya hai khwaab sajaane ka.

Gair ke pehlu me aur nazar meri taraf,
Bahut khoob hai andaaz dil jalaane ka.   

Shamma to shaan hotee hai mehfiloN ki,
Koun puchey hai haal kisi parwaane ka.

Hum na samjh paaye fitrat teri 'pankaj',
Khub seekha hai dastoor is jamaane ka.


(PWFS - 01/09/2012)

bohat khoob ghazal kahi aap ne ...bohat c daad....
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Quote from: mkv on September 01, 2012, 01:43:39 PM
Bahut sundar ur damdaar ghazal hai pankaj bhaai,
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

BAhut bahut sukriya mukesh ji qalaam ko pasand karne keliye........
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«Reply #14 on: September 06, 2012, 08:18:50 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on September 01, 2012, 03:43:39 PM
bahut sunder bahut hi badhiya lajawab aur umda rachna... hazaro daad aur mubarakbaad pankaj ji

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Bahut bahut sukriya Soudagar ji ........
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