~~"TOOT.TE HUE RISHTE KI KAHANI"~~

by k.shael on June 19, 2009, 10:54:47 AM
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Ek ladki ki kahani jiska pyaar use khud aakar chod jaane ki baat karta hai, kya beet rahi hogi uss masoom par jisne use shidatt se chaha, apna maana, kaise wo use jaane de, kaise dil ko manaye, par phir bhi jaane to dena hi hoga..



1st Part

Bewafayi bhi ki, aur ja bhi raha hai,
Khud ki galti ki saja, mujhe suna raha hai,

Kehta hai aaj hi mumkin ki baat ho tujhse,
Jaane do Aab mujhe mera naya kal bula raha hai,

Samjho to zara dosto uski uljhi baaton ko,
Wo chid raha hai mujhse ya baaton se chida raha hai,

Kya kahoo.n, kaise aur kyun rok loo.n use jaane se,
Jab khud wo meri mohabbat ko apni kaid bata raha hai,

Jaane de, aab na rokne ki zidd karna tu Shally,
Musafir tha tere dil ki basti ka,apni marzi se ja raha hai.

Shally.


2nd Part..

Mein tujhe rokna nahi chahti aab,
Teri marzi hai tu ruke ya jaaye aab,

Kya diya hi hai tune mohabbat ko meri,
Ja le ja tu apni kuch baaki wafaye bhi aab,

Zindagi tere hote bhi tanha hi thi meri,
Kya khaas hua jo tune bewafayi kar dikhayi aab,

Na utha tu taqleef door jaane ki mujhse,
Meri wafaye bhi na bulayengi tujhe o bewafa aab,

Beshumaar ho gayi baatein teri-meri,
Mujhe ashq bahane ki faqat aadat de ja aab.

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2009, 11:10:31 AM »
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Wow Shally ji,very nice and beautiful creation, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
very touching. love4
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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2009, 11:12:29 AM »
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kitna dard h har lafj me...rok na pane ki kaisi majburi h ye...bahut pyara likha h aapne dear Shally ji....palke nam ho gyi h padhkar tearyeyed
              Applause Applause Applause Applause
do lines yaad aa rahi h.....
                  Khta bhi aapne ki,khfaa bhi aap ho gaye
                  Judai par bhi haq nahi,juda bhi aap ho gaye
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«Reply #3 on: June 19, 2009, 11:25:38 AM »
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 tearyeyed tearyeyed Applause Applause Applause Applause Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai Shally jee apne...
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«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2009, 12:00:11 PM »
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Shallyyyyyyyyyy........ Itna Darddd...? Mujhe Nahi Pata ki Yeh Gazal Tune Kya soch Kar Likhi.. Par Padh kar Kuch such sa laga..!! sad5

Par Yeh Jo Dard Bhare Alfaaz tune Likhe hain.. Waqai Dil tak Utar gaye.. Us ladki ke dil ki Haalat ko Lafzon me Bakhoobi Utara hai dear.. great Work.. Applause Applause



Dil se daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2009, 06:25:22 AM »
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Bahut dard hai tumhaari is Ghazal mein, Shally Ji!  Bahut achha likha hai! Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2009, 08:24:18 AM »
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bahut khoob shally... Applause  Applause so touching...great work ..god bless u dear... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2009, 08:27:05 AM »
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Bohat Achche Shally, BOhat Achche Tareekhe Se Tumne Saari Kahaani Bataai Hai,.

Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2009, 08:36:16 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Shally Ji
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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2009, 11:07:16 AM »
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Wah Shally Ji bahut khoooob
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2009, 12:28:04 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 19, 2009, 11:10:31 AM
Wow Shally ji,very nice and beautiful creation, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
very touching. love4

Shukriya Madhu Dear,

Shally.
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«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2009, 12:37:36 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on June 19, 2009, 11:12:29 AM
kitna dard h har lafj me...rok na pane ki kaisi majburi h ye...bahut pyara likha h aapne dear Shally ji....palke nam ho gyi h padhkar tearyeyed
              Applause Applause Applause Applause
do lines yaad aa rahi h.....
                  Khta bhi aapne ki,khfaa bhi aap ho gaye
                  Judai par bhi haq nahi,juda bhi aap ho gaye

Shukriya Pooja Ji, Aapko rulane ka irada na tha, bass maine dil ke jabjbaat jahir kiye the..aapki likhi 2 lines bahut aachi lagi shukriya..

Shally.
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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2009, 02:52:38 PM »
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bahut bahut umda peshkash hai Shally
really too good
bahut emotional hai kyunki sach hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 22, 2009, 03:59:25 AM »
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Aaj Phir Tumhari Yeh Dard Bhari rachna Padhi Shally.. aur 2 Line Yaad aa Gain..!!


Ek Umar Guzaar Di Maine, Wafa Ki Talaash Me E-Yaaron,
Bewafa Itne Mile, Ki Ab Wafa Naam se Hi Nafrat Hai Mujhe...!!


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«Reply #14 on: September 02, 2009, 08:27:03 AM »
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