Tu khush Rahe Hamesha

by spandana on March 22, 2010, 08:09:39 AM
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Meri khushiyon par lag gaye kyon gam ka pehre
bheegi palko sa fisal kar toot rahe hai khwab mera
Sab chod gaye saathi do pal jo teri raah mein hum tehre
tujhe paane ka umeed mein toh hum rahe gaye akela
badalte mausam ki jab sunte hai aahat
yaad aati hai jo na aayi ek arse sa muskurat
chaurahe ki uss gali par kitni baar ruke hai
tera jaane ka baad kitni baar marr chuke hai
Zindagi na sahi meri maut ko khoobsurat bana ja
jaane sa pehle ek baar aakar chehra dikha jaa
ruksati ka waqt bhi yeh dil karega tujhko hee yaad
kush rahe tu hamesha bus yeh khuda sa hai fariyaad
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«Reply #1 on: March 22, 2010, 08:19:40 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Spananda ji,very touching and wonderful creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 22, 2010, 09:21:13 AM »
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Wah wah Spandan bahut achhi creation hai.
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«Reply #3 on: March 22, 2010, 10:14:45 AM »
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Bahut khoob Spandana
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«Reply #4 on: March 22, 2010, 10:18:13 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Spandanaji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: March 22, 2010, 11:19:00 AM »
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Quote from: spandana on March 22, 2010, 08:09:39 AM
Meri khushiyon par lag gaye kyon gam ka pehre
bheegi palko sa fisal kar toot rahe hai khwab mera
Sab chod gaye saathi do pal jo teri raah mein hum tehre
tujhe paane ka umeed mein toh hum rahe gaye akela
badalte mausam ki jab sunte hai aahat
yaad aati hai jo na aayi ek arse sa muskurat
chaurahe ki uss gali par kitni baar ruke hai
tera jaane ka baad kitni baar marr chuke hai
Zindagi na sahi meri maut ko khoobsurat bana ja
jaane sa pehle ek baar aakar chehra dikha jaa
ruksati ka waqt bhi yeh dil karega tujhko hee yaad
kush rahe tu hamesha bus yeh khuda sa hai fariyaad
Creative lineN haiN. Isi tarah likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #6 on: March 22, 2010, 02:19:39 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya meri poem ko pasand karne ka liye
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«Reply #7 on: March 22, 2010, 02:52:45 PM »
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Bahut khub...!!!  Applause Applause Applause

"sochta hoon main kabhi ye,
kaash hoti mere sang tu,
pyaar thi meri hamesha ,
par le gaya tujhko koi,
main akela hoon to kya hai,
hota hai kiska koi,
aaye the is jahaan me akele,
na saath jayega koi... "
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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2010, 12:21:52 PM »
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Shkriya Klaskar ji
Apne bhi bahut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2010, 02:30:31 PM »
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Dhanyawaad Spandana ji...!!!

Quote from: spandana on March 23, 2010, 12:21:52 PM
Shkriya Klaskar ji
Apne bhi bahut khoob likha hai
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