TUJHSE DIL LAGANA MERI BADI BHUL THI..SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on August 10, 2013, 06:47:14 PM
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bewafa tujhse dil lagana meri badi bhul thi
tujhe zindgi me lana meri badi bhul thi

sab chur chur kar diye arman dil ke tune
chaht ke khawab sajana meri badi bhul thi

ab aakhon se lahu bankar behte ho tum
tumhe aakhon mein basana meri badi bhul thi

mere honthon ki muskrahat cheen li tumne
tumhe apni muskan batana meri badi bhul thi

mere pyar ka mazak bna diya bhari mehfil mein
tujhse beinteha pyar jatana meri badi bhul thi

ab to nafrat ho gai hai mohabbat ke naam se
ishq me tujhko khuda batana meri badi bhul thi

sudhar loonga apni bhul ko ab seene se dil nikalkar
aashiqi mein apna wajood mitana meri badi bhul thi
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2013, 06:51:04 PM »
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fabulous as always.......jisne apko apna na banaya ,,y uski sbse badi bhool thi...or jisne apko thukaya usne sabs badi bhoolki....
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2013, 06:54:55 PM »
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BOHUT KHUB BHAI
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2013, 07:00:46 PM »
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awesome
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«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2013, 07:11:05 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2013, 07:15:41 PM »
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Saudagar Jee Aadaab...!


WaaH janab bahut khoob... badi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...
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Karan bhai bahut bahut lajawab likha hai..Haeeee re bewafaiii..Ekdum solid likha hai..Dhero daad..happy9
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Awesome creation..superb.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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shukriya sahil bhai
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bewafa tujhse dil lagana meri badi bhul thi
tujhe zindgi me lana meri badi bhul thi

sab chur chur kar diye arman dil ke tune
chaht ke khawab sajana meri badi bhul thi

Just beautiful..
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«Reply #14 on: August 10, 2013, 10:33:19 PM »
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waahhhhhhhhhhh waahhhhhhhhhhhh dukhi aashiq kya baat hai........ ladkiyon se dur rehne ki baat karke bhi aisi poem...... arjun zara fir iski class leni padegi ab........

lovely composition dear.... bht hi acha likha hai tumne karan.....
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