Tum bewafa hona bhi chaho to hone nahin denge...premdeep

by premdeep on July 30, 2013, 07:06:06 PM
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Dil tod kar hum tumko yun jane nahin denge
Tum bewafa hona bhi chaho to hone nahin denge

Har raat tere sapne mein aegi Surat jo  meri
Meri aankhon ke aanshu tumhe sone nahin denge

pyaar ki rah me jo kaante hi diye the  mujhko
Tumko bhi pholon ki shej par sone nahin denge

Barbaad karke nikal jana adat si hai tumhari
Ab kisi aur ko barbaad hum hone nahin denge

Tadapta ye dil har pal kahta hai yahi mujhse
pyaar ka vyopaar ab aur hone nahin denge

Katl to kayi baar huye the ashiqui me tumhari
Ab ye khoon ke cheente tumhe dhone nahin denge
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2013, 07:42:52 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2013, 09:17:55 PM »
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waaaaah waaaah kya baat hai  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2013, 11:47:42 PM »
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bahut khoobsoorat kalaam hai premdeep ji dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2013, 10:31:22 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah premdeep ji. is khoob kalam par waah waah aur sirf waaaaaaah... likhte rahiye.. dheron dheron daad..
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«Reply #6 on: August 02, 2013, 02:16:07 PM »
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bahut khoob paramdeep ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: August 02, 2013, 08:23:31 PM »
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very nice prem deep ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2013, 08:13:02 PM »
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Dil tod kar hum tumko yun jane nahin denge
Tum bewafa hona bhi chaho to hone nahin denge

pyaar ki rah me jo kaante hi diye the  mujhko
Tumko bhi pholon ki shej par sone nahin denge

Barbaad karke nikal jana adat si hai tumhari
Ab kisi aur ko barbaad hum hone nahin denge

Tadapta ye dil har pal kahta hai yahi mujhse
pyaar ka vyopaar ab aur hone nahin denge

Katl to kayi baar huye the ashiqui me tumhari
Ab ye khoon ke cheente tumhe dhone nahin denge

Bahut khoob Premdeep ji

Par is sher ke dono misre..contradicting each other
Har raat tere sapne mein aegi Surat jo  meri
Meri aankhon ke aanshu tumhe sone nahin denge
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Bahut Khoob.
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