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Jin ko milna na ho...
Wo kyun jeevan raste main aate hain..
Dil ko tarpaate hain..
Ankhon main bas jaate hain..
Jin ko milna na ho …
Wo kyun jeevan main pal pal yaad aate hain...
Rooh main utarte hain..
Tasavvur main poochte hain..
Hum yaad aate hain?
Haan! Tum yaad aate ha…..(NM)
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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2004, 08:52:13 AM » |
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ae zindagi tu yeh kis modh par layi hai mujhe...
pechche dekh kar dil udas hota hai..
aage jaane se dil ghabrata hai...
ek pal mein rukti hoon.. theharti hoon...
phir soach mein doob jaati hoon... (NM)
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2004, 03:20:09 PM » |
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Nice Nishita...
Aa bhi jaao ki zindagi kam hai
tum nahin ho to har khushi kam hai
(NM)
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nishita
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«Reply #3 on: September 28, 2004, 09:37:31 AM » |
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aa bhi jao ki zindagi kam hai
tumhare bin ankhen bhi nam hai
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«Reply #4 on: September 29, 2004, 05:22:03 AM » |
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well nice talat and nishita... lagta hai ki aap dono ki kahani mai twist hai..
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nishita
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«Reply #5 on: September 29, 2004, 07:31:34 AM » |
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zindagi khud hi twisted hai
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«Reply #6 on: September 29, 2004, 09:20:39 PM » |
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Beautiful word! Talat Ji! & NishiTa Ji!
Har Dhadaktey Patthar ko Log Dil Samajhtey hain,
Umr Beet jaati hai Dil Ko Dil Banaaney mein!
Fakhtaa ki Mazboori Yeh bhi Kah nahin Sakti,
Kaun Saanp rakhtaa hai uskey Aashiyaaney mein!
Doosaraa koi shaksh*, Zindagi mein Aayegaa,
Kitni Der Lagti hai, Usko Bhool Jaaney mein!
This is written by-Dr. Basheer Badr
Originally it is "Doosari koi Ladki" I have amended it as
"Doosara koi Shaksh"
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«Reply #7 on: September 30, 2004, 04:20:51 AM » |
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Wah! Arunji....Thanks
Thanks Sandeep
Isi main khush hoon mera dukh koi to sehta hai
chali chaloon ki jahaan tak ye saath rehta hai
zameen-e-dil yoon hi shadaab to nahin ae dost
qareeb main koi dariyaa zaroor behta hai
na jaane kaun sa fiqra kahan raqm ho jaaye
dilon ka haal bhi ab kaun kis se kehta hai
(Parveen Shakir)
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«Reply #8 on: September 30, 2004, 06:43:32 AM » |
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wah!!!!!! nishita....................talat.............
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«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2004, 06:46:59 AM » |
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thanks Waheed...
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«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2004, 07:47:51 AM » |
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thks sharmaji and waheed...
Dil-e-barbaad ki kahani sunte jaaiye
mere zakhmon ki zabaani sunte jaaiye
kuch bol to rahi hain meri aankhen dekho
kuch to keh raha hai paani sunte jaaiye.. (NM)
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«Reply #11 on: October 01, 2004, 09:45:11 AM » |
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Wow Nishita.. good one...
samajha na mera Gham koi is baat ka gham hai
phir bhi mere dil kuch to vafaaon ki kasam hai
aankhon main ho aansoo bhi magar beh nahin paaye
kehne ko bahut kuch tha magar keh nahin paaye....(NM)
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«Reply #12 on: October 01, 2004, 09:53:46 AM » |
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wah waah talat...
kaanton kii chubhan pai phuulon kaa mazaa bhii
dil dard ke mausam me royaa bhii hansaa bhii
aane kaa sabab yaad na jaane kii Khabar hai
vo dil me rahaa aur use tod gayaa bhii
har ek se manzil kaa pataa puuchh rahaa hai
gumraah mere saath huaa rahnumaa bhii
'Gumnaam' kabhii apanon se jo Gam huye haasil
kuchh yaad rahe un me kuchh bhuul gayaa bhii (NM)
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«Reply #13 on: October 01, 2004, 01:43:26 PM » |
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Very Nice! Lines written!!! Nice!All
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«Reply #14 on: October 03, 2004, 04:24:33 AM » |
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tark-e-muhabbat par bhi hogi un ko nadaamat ham se ziyada
kis ne ki hai kaun karega un se muhabbat ham se ziyada (NM)
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