Udaasi

by palkhi on September 21, 2007, 04:15:32 PM
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.....Udaas hai hum,

Magar koy kaya jaanai,

Kounsi Udassi hai chayi huyi humari iss baachpan ki dhoonya mein,

Iss udasi kai saath abb is Dhunya mein koh janai koh jee chahtha hai,

Iss udasi kai saath ajj kaal har lamha jhozarnai kho jee chatha hai.....

      ( My original..but also posted on mehfil)
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2007, 06:11:46 PM »
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palkhi G
kuch kam kam samajh aaya
shayad words aise likhe jo samajh nai aye kya likha hai


sorry bura mat maniyega

:D :D :D
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2007, 11:10:34 PM »
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.....Udaas hai hum,

Magar koy kaya jaanai,

Kounsi Udassi hai chayi huyi humari iss baachpan ki dhoonya mein,

Iss udasi kai saath abb is Dhunya mein koh janai koh jee chahtha hai,

Iss udasi kai saath ajj kaal har lamha jhozarnai kho jee chatha hai.....

      ( My original..but also posted on mehfil)


hmm acchi khoshish hai Palkhi ji. Itna hi kahenge hum k
udaas na raha kariye. God Bless
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