udas hun mai

by vikas2210 on July 28, 2006, 10:17:22 AM
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jise dil diya usne daga diya
leke mera dil pathar pe phenk diya
dil jo roya di dil use aawaz
usne hansi ke phuaro mai dhak liya

kaya karta mai dil se lachar tha
chaha tha usko khud se bhi zayada
hansi mai uske maine bhi saaath diya
bahata raha aansu mai akele mai

humne sapno mai bhi dekha to unko dekha
aur ek wo the usne mud ke kabhi dekha nahi
mere humdum the kuch pal pehle
ab hum to hum hai par dum nahi....



yaar aise hi kuch likhne ka man that par shayad kuch theek nahi bana.
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ranjana
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2006, 03:57:17 AM »
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yeh udas sa dil kuch kehta raha
aur waqt apni raftaar se behta raha
chhaaye rahe woh dil per kuch aise
ki sab taraf ek sanaata sa gunjata raha

dil mein uthate rahe kitne sawal aur jawab
ek dhuaan sa dil mein sulagata raha
ek aas  rahi shayad woh aaye palat ke
aur dil ek jhoothi umeed per jeeta raha

haath aaya toh sirf ek khali pan thaa
ek kasak se bhara hua sa mera mann thaa
yeh aaj fir kyu koi dil ke ass pass dolta raha
mera udaas mann ek adhuri si dastaan likhta raha ...likhta raha..
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«Reply #2 on: July 31, 2006, 05:26:22 AM »
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nice ranju.,.......

udas manki dastan tum samjh gaye
mera man kaya kehta kaya yeh bhi jaan gay?Huh??
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2006, 07:06:33 AM »
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bin kahe hum tere mann ki jaan jaate hain
yeh baat alag hai ki hum chah ke bhi tujhe bata na paate hain

kyu rehte hain hum khoye khoye kaise bataaye tujhe
kabhi khaomoshi se kabhi nazaro se tujhe apni yaad dila jaate hain
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«Reply #4 on: August 01, 2006, 07:38:46 AM »
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woow ranju very goooood......

teri chuppi kuch keh gai mujhse
mera man kuch keh gaya mujhise
na chah kar bhi hum muskura gaye
teri yaadon mai hum kuch is qadar kho gaye.....
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ranjana
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«Reply #5 on: August 01, 2006, 07:56:50 AM »
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shukriya Vikas .....good one...

teri yaado ne mere sapano ko saja ke rakha
kabhi jo bhari aankh toh teri mohabbat ne sambhale rakha
per kya khaber thee ki yeh sapane dam yun hi  todenge
aur hum yun sisak siask ke teri yaado mein apne ko dubo lenge
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