udasi:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

Sonu

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kal bhi intezaar tha un ka, aaj bhi hai
kal thi udaasi unhe paane ki, aaj unhe khokar udaas hai..


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myheart_ursonly

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Re: udasi

«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2006, 05:34:58 PM »

Quote from: "Sonu"

kal bhi intezaar tha un ka, aaj bhi hai
kal thi udaasi unhe paane ki, aaj unhe khokar udaas hai..

ek khwahish kab ummeed ban jaaye pata nahi
ye dil hai bus, isme hamari to khata nahi.


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nikki

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udasi

«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2006, 05:37:32 PM »

very nice both of u Sonu n brother....

kehte hain ki dil ki udasi nazron se bayaan hoti hai
magar jo hameshan nazrein zukhaye rehte hain ..unka haal-e-dil kaise jaane


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Sonu

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udasi

«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2006, 04:10:55 AM »

nice reply amit ji...

Jee rahi hoon kis liye mai iss gam-e zindagi ko,
Marke bhi keh na sakoongi apni kahaani ko !
Chup rahi to maar degi mujhey meri hi tanhaaee,
Keh diya to seh na sakoonga mai duniya ki Rusvaee !!

thanks nikki ji... wonderful nikki ji

Tamannaa thi jeene ki, koi chiraag na milaa
Tamannaa thi jeene ki, koi chiraag na milaa
Roshni chaahi thi
Magar andheraa milgayaa


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punjaban

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wow

«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2006, 10:59:11 PM »

aap log bohot acha likthay hay, saray kay saray. i hope kay aap log sirf bewafai meh nahee ray thay hay.

Zindagi kha doosra nam hay pyar
Pyar ka doosra nam hay bekar
Pyar tho bekar hay
Magar zindagi tho bay hisaab hay


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Sonu

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udasi

«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2006, 04:09:56 AM »

shukrya punjaban ji.... welcome to yoindia.... nahi punjaban kudiya asi sari jegha reney heygey haan... jethey vi dil ley javey uthye toor peyney haan...

nice punjaban kudiyeh...

but yaar bevafee chi pyar da jiker chenga nahi legda... to ahye hai tha teyra savaget hai...

Abkey bichdey phir shayad khuabon mein milein..
sookhey huey phool jaisey kitaabon mein milein.


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punjaban

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vah vah

«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2006, 06:33:05 PM »

kya lika hay yaar, tusi thay baray kamal day lik day ho,

Sano ishq dah nahi pata
Par ghum hay saday naal
Ishq tho kia nah kia
Ishq nay kardiya bora haal


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Sonu

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udasi

«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2006, 10:25:33 PM »

keyo ki huya soniye samjh nahi ahye kee likhya hyega hai.. heeriyeh mey tha punjabi vech guftugu keti si teyreynal... thanks punjaban kudiya... sona likhdi hai tovi...

hahahaa punjban kduiya yaar likhdi taa pura punjabi veh likhdi veh hindi khetu ah gayee hahah.. hal koi na..

ishq di gali hundi tey hai badi suhanim
per asi ehthey darda di mehphil laye beythey hain
to vi kuch sunadey dil di gal kanoo tanhaayeen vech roni hia


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Rajbir

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udasi

«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2006, 10:31:18 PM »

Sonu tusi bahut sohna likhiya hai... :D

Dujiyan da tan pata nahi, par mainu poora samajh aaya hai...

Rajbir


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punjaban

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oho yaar

«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2006, 10:58:17 PM »

actually yaar, i am punjabi, par i have been in america my whole life, i understand all of it, but i have forgotten most of it. i made myself look dumb, par thanks for the comment. i can speak mostly hindi also, but punjabi is kind of good, i am just punjabi, cant speak that well. yaar. Oh hey rajbir, i see u are punjabi too.


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Sonu

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udasi

«Reply #10 on: January 21, 2006, 11:04:09 PM »

thanks rajbir ji... menu nai peta si key tuhanu punjabi aundi hia...
chalo koi na dujiyaan no samjh ah gaye tavi thik hia nahi to tosi taa heygey hee ho samjhan valey...

thanks for reply rajbir ji...

Quote from: "Rajbir"

Sonu tusi bahut sohna likhiya hai... :D

Dujiyan da tan pata nahi, par mainu poora samajh aaya hai...

Rajbir


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punjaban

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i understand too~

«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2006, 12:24:24 AM »

acha gi, i know what u have said in all of ur poems. i just cant speak it right, acha, so aap humara saath punjabi meh khoob guftugu karsaak thay hay magar jawab hindi mehi milay gay. Mazak maath ora nah, samjay kya? :lol:

Nahi samaj ayi? oho, dont get all gusa ok, i am just kidding around, kya patha aap bora maan kay bayt jaya.

Maaf karday nah agar bura laga :oops:


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Sonu

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Re: oho yaar

«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2006, 02:55:04 AM »

koina koina heeriyeh its ok i can understand... mey bi punjabi hee haan... india vech mey kahli likh sakdi si per bolni thudi ohkhi legdi si per ethey ahkey vohi sikhlaye... yaar mey vi tha america vech he hai i don't forget punjabi effect i learn here because in india we speak mostly hindi but here all of the peoples and all friends they speak punjabi... chal koi na soniyeeh teno likhni nahi andi tan koi na per pedni tan andhi hai key oh vi bhul gayee hai.... acha where r u in america? and how long u r here?

Quote from: "punjaban"


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Sonu

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Re: i understand too~

«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2006, 03:03:23 AM »

haanji soniyee kedha... sat shiri akal ji...

tey pahrmaow devi ji key khey rahey si Usual Smile

.... oh good u understand what i worte i thought kahli naa di hee punjaban hai... its ok yaar cahluga mager yaar likhen da meja vi tey taan he ahuga jey koi agey samjhney tey bolenvaley meluga... koi na tusi sadey naal hindi vech he guftgu kerleyna sani koi problem nahi hai... soniyeeh sanu koi problem nahi tusi majak ker saktey hoon asi ehthey ahkey veh jey dostan dey nal naraj rehn leg paye taan dosti kern da pheyda he ki hia dostan dey nal hee hansi majak ker saktey haan gavandiya dey nal thuda na... so feel free to say anything i don't mind... if u want talk in mobile them let me know most welcome to call me... tey sanu dostan di gala da bura nahi legda hai... tey asi apney gall gussey vech lal nahi kerdey haan...maffi mangen di koi lood nahi hai i don't mind to have funn with u so feel free my dear punjaban kudiya to talk with me... glasses2

:lol:

Quote from: "punjaban"

acha gi, i know what you have said in all of ur poems. i just cant speak it right, acha, so aap humara saath punjabi meh khoob guftugu karsaak thay hay magar jawab hindi mehi milay gay. Mazak maath ora nah, samjay kya? :lol:

Nahi samaj ayi? oho, dont get all gusa ok, i am just kidding around, kya patha aap bora maan kay bayt jaya.

Maaf karday nah agar bura laga :oops:


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punjaban

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thanx

«Reply #14 on: January 22, 2006, 03:33:31 AM »

i live in maryland and been here for 13 years of my life. I dont know anything about my pakistani des. so its good that i have someone to talk to who wont get mad if i just maazak around. so u are very frank with everyone, kithnay dost hay up kay paas, million say bee zada hay nah. U write very fluently in punjabi, gosh i wish i knew how to speak that well. well how is ur life, what part of ny do u live in, how long have u been here? i used to live in the bronx with my family, but it was there was so much rush there. so talk to u later

take care, and smile karna humaray liya.


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