udasi -Panna 4:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

Sonu

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«Reply #45 on: January 27, 2006, 03:27:59 AM »

Jeet.... jey nahi sunya tahi hee tey keya si hon jey puchn di bajey seda mail kerdey taan meja ana si na... tuhada vi ohi hal hai gahr ahey mehman no cheeja puch puch key merna bavey banda bukha mer javey... per ohnu puchna na hatna... :lol: naa jey mey keya si key mey kadi ye gana suniya nahi hai to tuhanu bena meynu puchey song bheyj deyna cahida si na... chalo koi na... hon beyjdo mehrbani tuhadi...

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"

Quote from: "Sonu"

nice song Jeet ji... mey per suniya nahi si...

agar appko ya phir kisko bhi yeh song chahiye to mujhe bata do, i can mail

punjaban ji ,amrit saab ka song achha hai,phele suna hua hai


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Sonu

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udasi

«Reply #46 on: January 27, 2006, 03:40:44 AM »

wonderful Jeet...

paraaye ban kar aate toh hain
apne ban kar rota chhod jaatey hain
aansoon hum khud hi pee lete hain
nishaan woh dil par jo chhod jaatey hain

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"

Ek din tujko na dekha dil udas ho gaya ,
kuch hi pal mein tu itna khaas ho gaya,
ab tak to pata nahin tha mujhe,
lakin teri judaai se ye ehsaas ho gaya.


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Sonu

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Re: thanks yaar

«Reply #47 on: January 27, 2006, 03:44:17 AM »

sabi it was nice song..

don't know where he is? Puzzled !

mad for what sabi?... peta nahi sabi hu sakda hia meyri koi gal buri lagi huvey Rajbir noo :cry: yea hu sakda hai key ohnu time nahi lagya huvey... :? peta nahi sabhi per Rajbir no pm kerkey veykhlo... meyvi kerdeyngi haan...

Quote from: "punjaban"

i just wanted to show the song to see if you guys liked it.

Nice one Burning desires, i really like what you have written.

Where did Rajbir go?

sonu, do you think that he is mad? I mean i see he has left posts on other things, why not here?


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Rajbir

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udasi

«Reply #48 on: January 27, 2006, 01:03:03 PM »

Sonu, Sabi and Jeet !

Dosto main kithe nahi gaya. Kal jara busy si... :D
Awain tension lain lag painde o... :evil:
Te galat shalat na sochan lag peya karo

Main apne pyare doston se kabhi naaraz nahi hota.
By the way aap ke dimaag mein yeh khayal aaya kaise... :twisted:

Sonu and Jeet ...Tusi dona ne bahut wadiya likhiya hai !

Thoda serious hun

Bay parwa naal pyar pa kay asan dil da chain gwaya
Na us rajj kay dukhray dittay na rajj ka yaar rwayaa
Na us kitian rajj kay gallan na rajj kay yaar hasaya
Waikh lay kismet mari main pyar kindhay naal paya (nm)

Rajbir


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Naya_Daur

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udasi

«Reply #49 on: January 27, 2006, 05:18:05 PM »

Ik pyar kita,
Duja Dard Lita,
Teeja aan ke Gamma ne Gher Lita,

Ik Dil Tuteya,
Duja Jag Ruseya,
Teeja Mukh sajna ne Pher Lita
~~(nm)~~


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nikki

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udasi

«Reply #50 on: January 27, 2006, 05:25:14 PM »

wah ji wah ......very nice...

assin jadon vi hassan di koshish kitti
saano aan udasi gher laindi

saadi charcha hundi si gali gali
hun tan khabar koi virla hi lainda hai

na laio na laio...bekadran naal yaari
hun eh dil mera kehnda hai


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Naya_Daur

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udasi

«Reply #51 on: January 27, 2006, 06:09:08 PM »

Main mitti diyan dherian banaonda riha
main khayala vich duniya vasaonda riha
mera ho ke vi mera koi na banea
main har ik nu apna banaonda riha


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punjaban

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sorry

«Reply #52 on: January 28, 2006, 12:11:09 AM »

Rajbir, sorry, yaar, aadat si agayee thi, keh up haar vakt online ho tay hay
dont get mad~ :lol:
good poems, all in all!


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Sonu

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udasi

«Reply #53 on: January 28, 2006, 03:55:41 AM »

Rajbir tusi ta dara he deta si keo ki ek pheyla he narah hu gaya sey meyrey nalo taan mey suchiya keytey tuhanu mey meyri koi gal changi na lagi huvey kayee var mey kuch jayda he bol jandi han... tey uto sabi meynu puchen leg payee menu sochi paa ta key ketey Rajbir noo meyri koi gal da gussa na leg gaya huvey... meyney nal peyla hu chuki si ek vey he ek dost naraj hu gaya uhno taan mey kuch keyya vi nahi si shayra naal gel hundi se ek din ahkey kehyna mey hoon tuhadey nal shair nahi likhney mey keya teyri merji... mey keya mey taan tenu nahi bolya si key ah meyrey nal shiar likh ho jeyda shair likhda si mey udha jevab deyndi si ek din peta nahike huya unoo anyway mey sochiya ketey tohanu meyra koi sahir chenga nahi lega punjabi da yea ketey mey tunaho ehji gal keyti jethey tuhano boora leg paya huvey... phri ve Rajbir jey koi gal bori lagey taan mind na kerna plzz... tey meyrey kerkey apney baki dostu nu na bhulna...

thanks Rajbir...

Rajbir bahut vadiya likhya hai... rajbir glasses2

ehno tusi translate nahi keta :lol: keo huya translate di job changi nahi lagi kee gal :lol: koi na mey taan majak ker rahi si ethey ohi ahuga jenu punjabi andi huvey... :lol: :lol:

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Sonu

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udasi

«Reply #54 on: January 28, 2006, 04:02:10 AM »

Jeet pavey shair tuhada nahi hai per baut vadiyaa hia...

jado taan dil ney teynu palkaa vech bitayha si
haley dil meyriyaan ahkhaan ney dasiyaa si
teyri yaad andey he palka meyriaa bijh jandiyaan ney
teyiryaa khiyaalaan ney he tan ghar meyra vasaya si
hoon asi palkaan bijiyaan rakhan da jeema jevey uthaya hai

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"

Ik pyar kita,
Duja Dard Lita,
Teeja aan ke Gamma ne Gher Lita,

Ik Dil Tuteya,
Duja Jag Ruseya,
Teeja Mukh sajna ne Pher Lita
~~(nm)~~


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Sonu

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udasi

«Reply #55 on: January 28, 2006, 04:08:52 AM »

jee ahya noo nikki... bahot vadiya likha hai...

yaadaan da seylaab hai hoon yadaan teyriyaa
menoo milaan no beytaab hai hoon yadaan teyriyaa
mithi mithi khusbhoo hoon der tak avey
edha lagey jvey mehak gulab di hovey yadaan teyriyaa
ketey vi nazer nahi ahundi per
meyrey dil vech beyheesaab haan yadaan teyriyaa

Quote from: "nikki"


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Sonu

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udasi

«Reply #56 on: January 28, 2006, 04:11:54 AM »

too ghabra naa asi teyra sath devanga
pavey kal na rahey es duniya vech tavi yaadan teyriyaan vech naal ravangaey
lakh bhulna chavey to sano bhul nahi sakeynga
jey na vo huvangey duniyaa vech tavi teyrey nal sada saya chaluga...

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"

Main mitti diyan dherian banaonda riha
main khayala vich duniya vasaonda riha
mera ho ke vi mera koi na banea
main har ik nu apna banaonda riha


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Naya_Daur

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udasi

«Reply #57 on: January 28, 2006, 07:55:09 AM »

Duniya bedil hi changi c,
ki mileya tenu Rabba dil bana k,

koi poojda kise nu is dil vich vassa ke,
te koi khed da ae is nu khidauna bana ke.


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Sonu

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udasi

«Reply #58 on: January 29, 2006, 04:12:41 AM »

rab ko keo puchda hai oh ta app dil di gheyri vech duba hai,
jado husen uney banya si oh vi dil dey hato majboor si,
jado ishq tey husen da melap huya si
rab no vi badi takleef huee si...


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Naya_Daur

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udasi

«Reply #59 on: January 29, 2006, 10:31:52 AM »

"Koi aisi hawa chala rabba,
na husan rahe jahaan utte,

koi ajj mare, koi kal marey.
mela lagga rahe Shamshan utte.

Aitwaar da din hove na .
lakdan milan dukan utte,

je milan vi te hon gillian,
na agg lagge meri jaan utte"


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