udasi

by Sonu on January 13, 2006, 05:33:15 AM
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Sonu
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«Reply #60 on: January 31, 2006, 04:08:02 AM »
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hailaa bahut suna jeet...

damen heyga ena mar vee nahi sakdey
ginaa chaney haan per jee vi nahi sakdey
ena keo satandey ho merey humsafer meynu
key tanhavee vech vi sano kaleyaan noo peen nahi deyndey.
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«Reply #61 on: January 31, 2006, 04:41:25 AM »
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Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
"Koi aisi hawa chala rabba,
na husan rahe jahaan utte,

 koi ajj mare, koi kal marey.
mela lagga rahe Shamshan utte.

 Aitwaar da din hove na .
lakdan milan dukan utte,

je milan vi te hon gillian,
na agg lagge meri jaan utte"



Sonu, You know ,These were the last words spoken by Shiv kumar batalwi in memories of his beloved."
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«Reply #62 on: January 31, 2006, 05:00:37 AM »
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Wah jeet ji, kis shayar ki yaad dila di, Ek waqt tha, mai sirf shiv batlavi ji ko hi sunati thi.....
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Rajbir
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«Reply #63 on: January 31, 2006, 07:10:38 AM »
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Jeet

Thanks for sharing with us.

Shiv Kumar Batalvi  :arrow: Ultimate in punjabi poetry.

Pooja tusi vi Shiv Kumar ji diyan rachnavan sunde si...

Sonu bahut khoobsurat likha as always.

Rajbir
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #64 on: January 31, 2006, 07:12:04 AM »
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kya baat hai pooja ji,,!!!
aap bhi SK BATALVI ji ke fan hain,, sun kar bhut achha laga,,
appko main unke barre mein kuch batana chaunga.
 shayd app jante ho kuch batein liken yeh unke liye hai jo SHiv kumar ji ko nahi jaante
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«Reply #65 on: January 31, 2006, 07:14:44 AM »
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SHIv kumar ji SHARAB se itne inspire they ki uhno ne appne bachon ko  WHISKY aur RUM ke naam se pukarte the
yeh fact bhut kam log jaante hain
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #66 on: January 31, 2006, 07:52:39 AM »
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Shiv passed his matriculate exams in 1953, from Punjab University. He went on to enrol in the F.Sc. programme at Baring Union Christian College in Batala. Before completing his degree he moved to S.N. College, Qadian into their Arts program. It is here that he began to sing ghazals and songs for his classmates. Shiv never gave the final exams he needed to pass to receive his degree.

Around this period, he met a girl named Maina at a fair in Baijnath. When he went back to look for her in her hometown, he heard the news of her death and wrote his elegy 'Maina'. This episode was to prefigure numerous other partings that would serve as material to distil into poems. Perhaps the most celebrated such episode is his fascination for Gurbaksh Singh's daughter who left for the US and married someone else. When he heard of the birth of her first child, Shiv wrote 'Main ek shikra yaar banaya', perhaps his most famous love poem. It's said that when she had her second child, someone asked Shiv whether he would write another poem. Shiv replied 'Have I become responsible for her? Am I to write a poem on her every time she gives birth to a child?' Sounds much better in Punjabi (main oda theka leya hoyaa? Oho bacche banayi jave te main ode te kavita likhda rehma?).


Shiv kumar ji with his wife Aruna
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #67 on: January 31, 2006, 07:54:08 AM »
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«Reply #68 on: January 31, 2006, 08:21:39 AM »
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SHIV KUMAR ji di tarah,main kade likh tan nai sakda,, par uhna toh inspire ho ke ,, 2 lines likhiyan c,, jo main share karna chahwanga,

Dedicated to my Love

   Oh bewafa jis din teri maut howe,
   usdin dharti te aaya bhuchal howe,
   lakad mile na tenu aag laun nu,
   utton curfew laya sarkar howe,
   kafan mile na kise bazar vichon,
   utton kawa iilan ne laya darbar howe,
   oh gudgarzE! tu bhawein har kise li margi howe,
   par sirf 'JEET' nu hi tera intzar howe......
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«Reply #69 on: January 31, 2006, 12:23:21 PM »
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Sonu aur Jeet

Tusi dona ne bahut wadiya likhya hai.

Jeet brother thanks for throwing some light on the life of great poet Shiv Kumar Batalvi

Shiv Kumar dian chand lines pesh kar reha haan,
jo sade kai dostan di zindagi di sachai hai

jaach meinu aa gayi gham khaanh di,
holi holi ro ke chit parchaanh di,

changa hoya tuN praaya ho gaya,
mukk gayi chinta teinu apnanh di,


Rajbir
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Sonu
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«Reply #70 on: February 01, 2006, 05:10:39 AM »
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Jeet nahi menu nahi peta si shiv kumar dey barey... mey dehli vech si tey eskerkey jayda nahi peta si haan kadi kadar dil di gal shayri vech joroor kerleyndi bus.... meyney kesi vi shayar dey barey nahi peta heyga... thanks dasen vastey... kuch or info meyno mail kerdeyna plzz...

bahut he vadiya lines hai...

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
"Koi aisi hawa chala rabba,
na husan rahe jahaan utte,

 koi ajj mare, koi kal marey.
mela lagga rahe Shamshan utte.

 Aitwaar da din hove na .
lakdan milan dukan utte,

je milan vi te hon gillian,
na agg lagge meri jaan utte"



Sonu, You know ,These were the last words spoken by Shiv kumar batalwi in memories of his beloved."
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Sonu
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«Reply #71 on: February 01, 2006, 05:13:43 AM »
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jeet wonderfull... bahut he suna likhya hyega hai... jeet thanks for sharing with us...

kee bahursa es jalim jindgi da,
sang deyndi nahi kesi da,
ruva key meynu yadaan vech,
naseeb sunandi heygi hai khudaee da.


Rajbir thanks...

wonderful rajbir... bahut he wonderful lines ney...
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #72 on: February 03, 2006, 09:48:43 AM »
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jeet wonderfull... bahut he suna likhya hyega hai... jeet thanks for sharing with us...

kee bahursa es jalim jindgi da,
sang deyndi nahi kesi da,
ruva key meynu yadaan vech,
naseeb sunandi heygi hai khudaee da.


Rajbir thanks...

wonderful rajbir... bahut he wonderful lines ney...


bhut achha likha appne Sonu
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #73 on: February 03, 2006, 09:49:06 AM »
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zindagi mein kabhi kuchh chaha hi nahi,
jise chaha use kabhi paya hi nahi,

jise paya use yun kho diya jaise
zindagi mein kabhi koi aaya hi nahi..!
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Meena is back
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«Reply #74 on: February 03, 2006, 06:37:31 PM »
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bohot ache buring ji...

unke aane se pehle bhi zindagi sunsaan ti,
unke jane ke baad bhi zindagi viran hai,
bas wohi pal jeene ke layak te "Meena",
jin palon me humari unse pehechan ti!
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