*!* Uske Naam Ke Sindoor Se *!*

by Matrix Guy on December 28, 2010, 07:47:51 AM
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Muje Uska Diya Har Dard, Lubhata Raha He
 Taklif Dene Ki Har Rasm, Wo Dil Se Nibhata Raha He

Apni Palko Se Uthaya, Mene Uski Raah Ke Har Kantee Ko
Aksar Wo Un Kantoo Ko, Mere Hi Dil Me Chubhata Raha He 

Ki Mene Har Mumkin Koshish, Use Pyar Dene Ki
Wo Muje Ped Se Tute Patte Ki Tarah, Harbar Girata Raha He

Apne Anchal Me Rakha Mahfuuj, Use Is Duniya Se
Wo Begart Isi Anchal Me, Aag Sulgata Raha He

Jab Bhi Sajayi Mene Mahfil, Us Ke Rutbee Me
Wo Geroo Ke Geet Hi, Waha Gungunata Raha He

Roj Subah Sajti Rahi Me, Uske Naam Ke Sindoor Se
Wo Bewafayi Ka Aiina, Wahi Dikhata Raha He

Dil Se Di Mene Wafa, Aur Nibhayi Jaan Ki Hud Tak
Wo Mera Hokar Bhi, Raqibo Ka Farz Nibhata Raha He

 Thankyou !
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2010, 08:04:35 AM »
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wah....wah kamal lka likha hai.. padakar yese laga jaise mere hi dil se nikle shabad hain...sach badiya....
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2010, 08:22:17 AM »
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thx manjum ji ....thx  a lot
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2010, 08:29:37 AM »
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Bahut khoob matrix ji....
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2010, 08:49:50 AM »
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bahut khoob bhai...ye hui na koi baat...

aise alfaaazaaat sunne ko hi ham aapse yun likhne ki guzaish karte he ..haaaain

dher saari daad~


kuchh maine bhi ki apne dil ko dhoondne ki koshish bahut
na mile tum kahin na kahin mujhe apni dhadkan sunai diii~

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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2010, 09:05:04 AM »
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Aadaab Janab... !

Lagta hai dard e bewaafai ka mousam chaya hai
YO meiN...

Achche ahsaas o khayaal kahe hai daad...
Likhate rahiye.....

Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2010, 09:08:07 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 28, 2010, 08:29:37 AM

Bahut khoob matrix ji....

ye kya he geet ji...........2 line reply ki mil jati to is post me jaan aa jati.......thx ji thx
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«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2010, 09:12:24 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on December 28, 2010, 08:49:50 AM
bahut khoob bhai...ye hui na koi baat...

aise alfaaazaaat sunne ko hi ham aapse yun likhne ki guzaish karte he ..haaaain

dher saari daad~


kuchh maine bhi ki apne dil ko dhoondne ki koshish bahut
na mile tum kahin na kahin mujhe apni dhadkan sunai diii~



thx my dear...teri 2 line sab pe bhari he......thx
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«Reply #8 on: December 28, 2010, 09:13:37 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 28, 2010, 09:05:04 AM
Aadaab Janab... !

Lagta hai dard e bewaafai ka mousam chaya hai
YO meiN...

Achche ahsaas o khayaal kahe hai daad...
Likhate rahiye.....

Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile          


parwaaj ji apka comment ana matlab inaam milna he ......

i m very very happy that i got ur comment......thx lot
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«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2010, 09:39:43 AM »
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rajaji.......no words for this poem re...kuch apne se haalat aur apni hi zindagi nazar k age se guzar gai..kuch apni harkatein fir dilodimag pe bhaari pad rahi hai....

bht hi behtareen peshkash hai ji ye aapki.....iske liye aapko ek FHH
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«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2010, 09:42:13 AM »
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thx anamika ji........ab aur kya kahu......its all urs
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«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2010, 09:44:55 AM »
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i know ji...and know y it came out.....
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«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2010, 10:24:35 AM »
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MG ji bahut sunder ehsaas....khoob surat shabdo ka prayog....kya mast soch...
Khud jis raah se gujre uss ka...jaise aankho dekha haal...wah ji wah ... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Sarsari taur se padho tou yahi pratikriya hoti hai......

Par jara sochiye.....aapko nahi lagta ess kalaam ko likhte likhte aap bhatak gaye ho.....kho gaye ho....male se female kirdaar mai pahunch gaye ho.....
Lagta hai jaise kisi Premikaa ne likhi ho apne premi k liye.....

Apne Anchal Me Rakha Mahfuuj, Use Is Duniya Se
Wo Begart Isi Anchal Me, Aag Sulgata Raha He

Roj Subah Sajti Rahi Me, Uske Naam Ke Sindoor Se
Wo Bewafayi Ka Aiina, Wahi Dikhata Raha He

Aap he bataaiye ye likhte waqt aap kis mood mai they..?

Quote from: Matrix Guy on December 28, 2010, 07:47:51 AM
Muje Uska Diya Har Dard, Lubhata Raha He
 Taklif Dene Ki Har Rasm, Wo Dil Se Nibhata Raha He

Apni Palko Se Uthaya, Mene Uski Raah Ke Har Kantee Ko
Aksar Wo Un Kantoo Ko, Mere Hi Dil Me Chubhata Raha He  

Ki Mene Har Mumkin Koshish, Use Pyar Dene Ki
Wo Muje Ped Se Tute Patte Ki Tarah, Harbar Girata Raha He

Apne Anchal Me Rakha Mahfuuj, Use Is Duniya Se
Wo Begart Isi Anchal Me, Aag Sulgata Raha He

Jab Bhi Sajayi Mene Mahfil, Us Ke Rutbee Me
Wo Geroo Ke Geet Hi, Waha Gungunata Raha He

Roj Subah Sajti Rahi Me, Uske Naam Ke Sindoor Se
Wo Bewafayi Ka Aiina, Wahi Dikhata Raha He

Dil Se Di Mene Wafa, Aur Nibhayi Jaan Ki Hud Tak
Wo Mera Hokar Bhi, Raqibo Ka Farz Nibhata Raha He

 Thankyou !
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«Reply #13 on: December 28, 2010, 10:39:29 AM »
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Matrix ji--
sorry pehla reply del ho gaya.
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aapka ye bilkul alag tarike ka peshkash--
behtareen hai bhai.
hats off
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«Reply #14 on: December 28, 2010, 11:03:02 AM »
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kya baat hai mg....
bht accha likha hai tumne....
specially 1st one...
just luv it...

kuch lines meri taraf se bhi...

jis shaksh ko tu shiddat se satata raha hai...
wo shaksh thujhey toot kar chahata raha hai
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