*!* Uske Naam Ke Sindoor Se *!*

by Matrix Guy on December 28, 2010, 07:47:51 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 28, 2010, 11:16:27 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 28, 2010, 10:24:35 AM
MG ji bahut sunder ehsaas....khoob surat shabdo ka prayog....kya mast soch...
Khud jis raah se gujre uss ka...jaise aankho dekha haal...wah ji wah ... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Sarsari taur se padho tou yahi pratikriya hoti hai......

Par jara sochiye.....aapko nahi lagta ess kalaam ko likhte likhte aap bhatak gaye ho.....kho gaye ho....male se female kirdaar mai pahunch gaye ho.....
Lagta hai jaise kisi Premikaa ne likhi ho apne premi k liye.....

Apne Anchal Me Rakha Mahfuuj, Use Is Duniya Se
Wo Begart Isi Anchal Me, Aag Sulgata Raha He

Roj Subah Sajti Rahi Me, Uske Naam Ke Sindoor Se
Wo Bewafayi Ka Aiina, Wahi Dikhata Raha He

Aap he bataaiye ye likhte waqt aap kis mood mai they..?


thx koyal ji ......apko pasand ayi is baat se muje bht khushi hui......aur dear me bhatka nahi hu muje pata he mene kya likha he......wese apke sawal ka jawab khud apne hi de diya he .....jo apne bataya he uske uper bhi ek line he jaha apko clear ho jayega....yes its feelings of a female heart ....2nd line padiye fir se.....ek ladki kah rahi he ......taklif dene ki har rasm wo dilse nibhata raha he..."raha he" mean for a boy whom she love.....aur ye hi theme end tak he ....dear ye jaruri to nahi ki ek male agar kuch likhe to wo male ki he feelings ho.......mene aaj pahli baar kisi female ko base bana ke nahi likha he.......i repeat that it is a feelings of a girl written by male. and its me.....
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«Reply #16 on: December 28, 2010, 11:20:31 AM »
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Quote from: killbill on December 28, 2010, 10:39:29 AM
Matrix ji--
sorry pehla reply del ho gaya.
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aapka ye bilkul alag tarike ka peshkash--
behtareen hai bhai.
hats off

KB ji.....

dhanywad ........apke shabdo se encouragement milta he .thx a lot
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«Reply #17 on: December 28, 2010, 11:22:41 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on December 28, 2010, 11:03:02 AM
kya baat hai mg....
bht accha likha hai tumne....
specially 1st one...
just luv it...

kuch lines meri taraf se bhi...

jis shaksh ko tu shiddat se satata raha hai...
wo shaksh thujhey toot kar chahata raha hai



kya baat he priya ....good and sweet reply ji........jab koi post pe is andaaj me reply karta he sach badi khushi hoti he......thx ji thx a lot
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«Reply #18 on: December 28, 2010, 11:37:06 AM »
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thanx mg.....
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«Reply #19 on: December 28, 2010, 11:59:31 AM »
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Sahi Ranaji sab sahi hai....humne bhi tou yahi kaha hai..aapne male se female k kirdaar mai aa k likhi hai.....Hum naariyon k nazariye se mohabbat ki zindagi ko dekhna aur likhna aapka ye andaaz hume bahut pasand aaya....Dekho na kitni taaliyen bhi bajaai thi humne......
Chaliye maan lete hain aap bhatke nahi...kuchh lamho k liye aap hamaari shreynee mai shamil ho gaye they...at least vichhar dhaaraa mai he sahi...... Winking Winking Winking

Quote from: Matrix Guy on December 28, 2010, 11:16:27 AM
thx koyal ji ......apko pasand ayi is baat se muje bht khushi hui......aur dear me bhatka nahi hu muje pata he mene kya likha he......wese apke sawal ka jawab khud apne hi de diya he .....jo apne bataya he uske uper bhi ek line he jaha apko clear ho jayega....yes its feelings of a female heart ....2nd line padiye fir se.....ek ladki kah rahi he ......taklif dene ki har rasm wo dilse nibhata raha he..."raha he" mean for a boy whom she love.....aur ye hi theme end tak he ....dear ye jaruri to nahi ki ek male agar kuch likhe to wo male ki he feelings ho.......mene aaj pahli baar kisi female ko base bana ke nahi likha he.......i repeat that it is a feelings of a girl written by male. and its me.....


Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 28, 2010, 10:24:35 AM
MG ji bahut sunder ehsaas....khoob surat shabdo ka prayog....kya mast soch...
Khud jis raah se gujre uss ka...jaise aankho dekha haal...wah ji wah ... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Sarsari taur se padho tou yahi pratikriya hoti hai......

Par jara sochiye.....aapko nahi lagta ess kalaam ko likhte likhte aap bhatak gaye ho.....kho gaye ho....male se female kirdaar mai pahunch gaye ho.....
Lagta hai jaise kisi Premikaa ne likhi ho apne premi k liye.....

Apne Anchal Me Rakha Mahfuuj, Use Is Duniya Se
Wo Begart Isi Anchal Me, Aag Sulgata Raha He

Roj Subah Sajti Rahi Me, Uske Naam Ke Sindoor Se
Wo Bewafayi Ka Aiina, Wahi Dikhata Raha He

Aap he bataaiye ye likhte waqt aap kis mood mai they..?
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«Reply #20 on: December 28, 2010, 12:06:57 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 28, 2010, 11:59:31 AM
Sahi Ranaji sab sahi hai....humne bhi tou yahi kaha hai..aapne male se female k kirdaar mai aa k likhi hai.....Hum naariyon k nazariye se mohabbat ki zindagi ko dekhna aur likhna aapka ye andaaz hume bahut pasand aaya....Dekho na kitni taaliyen bhi bajaai thi humne......
Chaliye maan lete hain aap bhatke nahi...kuchh lamho k liye aap hamaari shreynee mai shamil ho gaye they...at least vichhar dhaaraa mai he sahi...... Winking Winking Winking




ek dum sahi kaha hukum ........aap kabhi galat kah hi nahi sakti.....u r a sweet koyal......thx ji thx aur ha bas vicharo me hi shamil hua hu.........shetani to koi aapse sikhe....
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«Reply #21 on: December 28, 2010, 12:17:25 PM »
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Daal mai tadka na ho tou kya daal ka swaad
Game me shatani na ho tou kya khel ka mazaa
Teekhi mirch na ho khaane me tou kya aanand
Ye hamaari nok-jhonkh na ho tou....
socho kya ho...? kitna neeras ho ye sab.....
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«Reply #22 on: December 28, 2010, 12:20:58 PM »
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 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy

ye nok jok nahi he ji ....sach kahu to ye prove karta he ki yaha post ko sab kitne dhyan se padte he aur samajte he......
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«Reply #23 on: December 28, 2010, 01:00:24 PM »
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Aap bhi naa.....ye aapke ess comment par likha hai ji....


Quote from: Matrix Guy on December 28, 2010, 12:06:57 PM
shetani to koi aapse sikhe....
Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 28, 2010, 12:17:25 PM
Daal mai tadka na ho tou kya daal ka swaad
Game me shatani na ho tou kya khel ka mazaa
Teekhi mirch na ho khaane me tou kya aanand
Ye hamaari nok-jhonkh na ho tou....
socho kya ho...? kitna neeras ho ye sab.....
Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle
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«Reply #24 on: December 28, 2010, 01:34:30 PM »
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Bahut Khub Matrix Ji Bahut Hi Sunder Aur Dard Bhara Likha Hai Aapne
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«Reply #25 on: December 28, 2010, 10:14:08 PM »
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kya baat hai Matrix ji... bahut hi khubsurat likha hai aapne...


ki rasme mohabaat mein luta di jaane maine
lekin kabhi uske hontho se ek aah tak na nikli... !

Intezar !
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