Waah!!! kya silah mila pyar ka..........

by fairy2633 on March 01, 2009, 06:27:04 AM
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Rehti thi noor-ki-rangat uske chehre par
Aaj dekh uski udaasi........
Timtimatey taaron ne bhi chamakna chod diya...

Aisa manzar chaya teri beywafayi se ke
Dil toh toota hi...
Aankhon nei bhi khwab bunna chod diya...

Dekh kar uske aansuu..
samandar toh bhar hi gaya tha...
Baadalon nei bhi barasna chod diya...

Uske pyar ki hadh toh dekho..
Woh karti rahi uska intezaar aur...
waqt nei aage badna chod diya...

Waah!! kya silah mila use pyar ka....
Dekh kar uski wafa doston...
wafaon nei bhi wafa karna chod diya...
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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2009, 06:35:16 AM »
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Wah Fairy sis.. bahut dino ke baad aapko pada aur accha laga. Good work keep up. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2009, 06:38:20 AM »
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thnks roja sis...thanks for reading my poetry and appreciating it... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2009, 06:56:45 AM »
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thnks roja sis...thanks for reading my poetry and appreciating it... Usual Smile

You are most welcome dear Fairy sis... God Bless
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2009, 10:22:30 AM »
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Rehti thi noor-ki-rangat uske chehre par
Aaj dekh uski udaasi........
Timtimatey taaron ne bhi chamakna chod diya...

Aisa manzar chaya teri beywafayi se ke
Dil toh toota hi...
Aankhon nei bhi khwab bunna chod diya...

Dekh kar uske aansuu..
samandar toh bhar hi gaya tha...
Baadalon nei bhi barasna chod diya...

Uske pyar ki hadh toh dekho..
Woh karti rahi uska intezaar aur...
waqt nei aage badna chod diya...

Waah!! kya silah mila use pyar ka....
Dekh kar uski wafa doston...
wafaon nei bhi wafa karna chod diya...


Applause Applause Applause wah wah Fairy jee...wonderful writing...a superb piece thats deserves all the appreciation... Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2009, 01:19:30 PM »
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Waah Waah waah, Kya Khoob, Bohat Khoob Likha Hai Fairy Ji, Nice One, Good Job yaar,.
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2009, 02:58:57 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause wah wah Fairy jee...wonderful writing...a superb piece thats deserves all the appreciation... Applause


thanks dead heart ji..thanks for ur appreciation...
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2009, 02:59:58 AM »
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Waah Waah waah, Kya Khoob, Bohat Khoob Likha Hai Fairy Ji, Nice One, Good Job yaar,.

shukriya janasheen ji...thanks a lot...
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2009, 04:06:38 AM »
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Very very nice creation fairy sis Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 05, 2009, 09:59:11 AM »
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Very very nice creation fairy sis Applause Applause

shukriya salma ji....
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