““wo beqadar tha………””:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

nirala

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wo beqdar tha jo chla gya
dil bdnaseeb usi se to chhala gya

rhnuma bnkr aye the umido ki
hewaniyat fir b dika gya

sath nibhane ka wada kr
bhrosa dil se mita gya

chum kr mathe ko,kahi thi jo bat usne
thukrakr muje fir,jaat bewafao ki jata gya

mai roi ab yad me uske,beth tanha akele
chup-2 ashq bhane ka rsta b wo bta gya

smjhu me,tha wo bqdar bewafa,fir b
mitaye na mite,tasveer dil me apna hi wo basa gya

kya-2 na the arman dil ki khuaiso ke
armano ki sez pr hi,dil ki arthi wo saja gya


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mamta bajpai

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Re: ““wo beqadar tha………””

«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2011, 04:40:43 AM »

bahut khoob Nirala jee!khas tour par ist 2 lines.....


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nirala

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«Reply #2 on: May 30, 2011, 06:03:38 PM »

Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 14, 2011, 04:40:43 AM

bahut khoob Nirala jee!khas tour par ist 2 lines.....

thanx mam……
mera likha agr aap jaisi lajawab shayra ko ek shabd bhi acha lage to mai khusnaseeb smjhu khud ko…
aapne to pure 2 lines ki tarif kar di hai to khusi se fool gaya ye nir Usual Smile

thanx ji


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brokenbyluv

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Re: ““wo beqadar tha………””

«Reply #3 on: May 30, 2011, 06:10:53 PM »

Quote from: nirala on May 13, 2011, 03:03:56 PM

Awesome,fantastin,mindblowing tooo gud nirala ji bahutttttttttttt koob ji bahut khoob likha hai.....


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nirala

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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2011, 02:49:25 AM »

Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 30, 2011, 06:10:53 PM

Awesome,fantastin,mindblowing tooo gud nirala ji bahutttttttttttt koob ji bahut khoob likha hai.....

thanx geet…
lekin kuch jada tarif kar di aapne…
mai kabhi itni tarif ka haqdaar nai smjhta khud ko…


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