""wo paggli thi wo deewani thi" 'nirala'

by nirala on December 23, 2010, 11:14:41 AM
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wo pagli thi wo deewani thi
uski zindgi ek ajab kahani thi
  krti thi wo pyar kisi se
  dil o jaan se mrti thi
aitvaar tha usspar usko
bhagwaan se jada khud se jada
  uske hi khatir gharwalon se jhagadti thi
  bs usko hi apna sbkuch smjhti thi
Uske hi dil ko tod gaya woh
Tadapta bilakhta usse chhod gaya woh
saare sapne dhumil hue uss deewani ke
dil toota hosh chuta uss deewani ke
  ab b yakeen hai usse
laut ayega mehbub uska
 fir se palko pr use bithayega
ashko se uske sahlayega
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #1 on: December 24, 2010, 12:27:04 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai nirala ji bus mujhe ant mein kuch kami lagi agar aap ant mein kuch ashaar aur kod de tou apki kavita aur bhi khubsurat ho jayegi...
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«Reply #2 on: December 24, 2010, 12:54:45 PM »
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thanx Brknluv ji...
lekin jodna to mai chahta tha
bt mobile me space nhi tha..
wese ye koi kavita nhi hai..
bas meri ek dost ki sachhi kahani hai.
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thanx
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«Reply #3 on: December 24, 2010, 01:06:36 PM »
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Ok ji mujhe bhi ye kahani hi lagi thi per zara si kami k kaaran kavita keh diya..per bahut behetareen hai..keep writing...sache ehsaso se juda har lafz subhanallah hota hai..
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nirala
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«Reply #4 on: December 24, 2010, 01:52:39 PM »
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hahaha
meko likhna ni aata ji;)
bas masti karta hu
thoda sa dil behlaata hun
achhe sayron ko buri chijen padhwata hun..Usual Smile
hav fun always--
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thanx
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«Reply #5 on: December 24, 2010, 04:07:39 PM »
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wo pagli thi wo deewani thi
uski zindgi ek ajab kahani thi
  krti thi wo pyar kisi se
  dil o jaan se mrti thi
aitvaar tha usspar usko
bhagwaan se jada khud se jada
  uske hi khatir gharwalon se jhagadti thi
  bs usko hi apna sbkuch smjhti thi
Uske hi dil ko tod gaya woh
Tadapta bilakhta usse chhod gaya woh
saare sapne dhumil hue uss deewani ke
dil toota hosh chuta uss deewani ke
  ab b yakeen hai usse
laut ayega mehbub uska
 fir se palko pr use bithayega
ashko se uske sahlayega


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nirala
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«Reply #6 on: December 24, 2010, 04:45:56 PM »
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kisi ne sach kaha hai
ladkiyon ke paas deemaag thoda sa kam luv ke mamle me aur
dil me pyaar bahut jaada hota hai
...Usual SmileUsual Smile
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: December 25, 2010, 08:33:56 PM »
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wo pagli thi wo deewani thi
uski zindgi ek ajab kahani thi
  krti thi wo pyar kisi se
  dil o jaan se mrti thi
aitvaar tha usspar usko
bhagwaan se jada khud se jada
  uske hi khatir gharwalon se jhagadti thi
  bs usko hi apna sbkuch smjhti thi
Uske hi dil ko tod gaya woh
Tadapta bilakhta usse chhod gaya woh
saare sapne dhumil hue uss deewani ke
dil toota hosh chuta uss deewani ke
  ab b yakeen hai usse
laut ayega mehbub uska
 fir se palko pr use bithayega
ashko se uske sahlayega


Bahut khoob Nir-ala Ji
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