Woh pani ki lehroun pe kia likh raha tha

by frndzz4ever on July 09, 2009, 06:18:55 PM
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Woh pani ki lehroun pe kia likh raha tha,
Khuda janay harf e dua likh raha tha,

likha tha jis nay pyaar ka maani adhora,
woh shaks pyaar ki intiha likh raha tha,

zara us ki ankhoun say ansoun na tapkay,
woh jis waqt harf e saza likh raha tha,

Muhabbat main nafrat mili the usay b ,
woh har shaks ko beewafa likh raha tha....

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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2009, 07:46:52 PM »
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Wah Frndz4ever ji,kamaal ka likha aapne,excellent,wonderful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2009, 06:10:57 AM »
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Woh pani ki lehroun pe kia likh raha tha,
Khuda janay harf e dua likh raha tha,

likha tha jis nay pyaar ka maani adhora,
woh shaks pyaar ki intiha likh raha tha,

zara us ki ankhoun say ansoun na tapkay,
woh jis waqt harf e saza likh raha tha,

Muhabbat main nafrat mili the usay b ,
woh har shaks ko beewafa likh raha tha....
bahut khoob dost ..bahut gehre tak maar kiya aapki is creation ne
aise hi likhte raho dost
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2009, 08:28:01 AM »
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Nice one Frndzz Ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2010, 07:05:02 AM »
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Woh pani ki lehroun pe kia likh raha tha,
Khuda janay harf e dua likh raha tha,

likha tha jis nay pyaar ka maani adhora,
woh shaks pyaar ki intiha likh raha tha,

zara us ki ankhoun say ansoun na tapkay,
woh jis waqt harf e saza likh raha tha,

Muhabbat main nafrat mili the usay b ,
woh har shaks ko beewafa likh raha tha....

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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2010, 07:12:31 AM »
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Woh pani ki lehroun pe kia likh raha tha,
Khuda janay harf e dua likh raha tha,

likha tha jis nay pyaar ka maani adhora,
woh shaks pyaar ki intiha likh raha tha,

zara us ki ankhoun say ansoun na tapkay,
woh jis waqt harf e saza likh raha tha,

Muhabbat main nafrat mili the usay b ,
woh har shaks ko beewafa likh raha tha....

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Bahut hi pyari creaton hai frndzz4ever. Thanks for sharing.
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2011, 04:57:49 PM »
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last kd  aashar superb hain ji
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