yadoon ki kali ratoon may dard ka chand chamakta hay

by payar on July 22, 2008, 08:09:23 AM
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yadoon ki kali ratoon may dard ka chand chamakta hay
tanhai ki sooni ratoon may ankho ka jam chalakta hay
payar ki rahoon ki koi manzil nahi hua karty
in rahon par chalnay wala sada yunhi bahtakta hay
payar wo payas hay jo kabhi nahi buhjty
yeh amrat peenay wala bond bond ko tarasta hay
chaya rehta hay dil par udassi ka musam
jab dard ka badel garajta hay barasta hay
urha lay jata hay sabhi mazi ki yadoon ko
jab jazbat ka tufan is dil say guzarta hay
samaitnay may ussay sadiyan lagtay hain
jo wajod yunhi pal baher may bahkirta hay
khushi kay pal yun guzar jatay hain zindgi may
jaisay rait ka zara haton say pahseelta hay
jo agg lagi thee barsoo pehlay man may meray
uss ka shula ajj b dil may meray bahrakta hay
wo mujhay bohal jain tu marzi un ki
par yeh dil ajj b un kay nam say dahrakta hay
joo kal tak apnay thay aj paraye hain
yeh waqat b kitny jaldi badalta hay
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2008, 08:23:37 AM »
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waah bohut khoob likha hai
ek ek shabd mei sachai chipi hai
gud creation
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2008, 08:30:34 AM »
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thanks for ur appreciation happy3
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2008, 08:37:04 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
bahoot khoobsurat likha hai.payar ji aapne......
ek anokhi si sihran si doud gai ye kavita padh-kar......beshaq bahoot achchi peshkash hai aapki...yun hi likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2008, 08:45:29 AM »
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Bahut Hi Acha Likha Hai Aapne. :clap:Good Work
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2008, 10:57:50 AM »
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Too good payar ji.Really very nice.
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2008, 01:58:35 PM »
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reallyyar bht hi pyara likha hai,nice
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2008, 03:25:18 AM »
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bahoot khoob payar ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2008, 03:47:13 AM »
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thanks ap sab ka kay ap nay mujhay appreciate kiya Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2008, 03:50:21 AM »
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yadoon ki kali ratoon may dard ka chand chamakta hay
tanhai ki sooni ratoon may ankho ka jam chalakta hay
payar ki rahoon ki koi manzil nahi hua karty
in rahon par chalnay wala sada yunhi bahtakta hay
payar wo payas hay jo kabhi nahi buhjty
yeh amrat peenay wala bond bond ko tarasta hay

Payar ji very well expressed lines. Bahut accha laga padkar.
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2008, 03:53:58 AM »
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kash dil-e bay zuban dastan-e gahem khud bayan karta
millay jitnay hain zakham sab ayan karta
thanks
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