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«Reply #30 on: May 23, 2007, 09:49:32 AM » |
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Thanx netra ji aap bhaiot ache likhte ho...
Wo sitare ,wo chandni sab dekh ke bhi chup rahe,
Dur sadkon par kisiki ahaate meri tanhayion ki basti me chup rahe
gam ki vira mausam me jane kya kya ho gaya
ru me sahme kuch khawab dil me hi chup rahe
Fasle damiyan itne the ki ham bebasi se chup rahe
chahaton ki duniya ujadte dekh ke bhi ham chup rahe....
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«Reply #31 on: May 23, 2007, 10:21:46 AM » |
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Punam, Netra
Bahut achche !
Bahut achcha laga aap dono ka likha padh kar !
Punam :arrow: keep going
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«Reply #32 on: May 23, 2007, 12:30:56 PM » |
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Thanx netra ji aap bhaiot ache likhte ho...
Wo sitare ,wo chandni sab dekh ke bhi chup rahe,
Dur sadkon par kisiki ahaate meri tanhayion ki basti me chup rahe
gam ki vira mausam me jane kya kya ho gaya
ru me sahme kuch khawab dil me hi chup rahe
Fasle damiyan itne the ki ham bebasi se chup rahe
chahaton ki duniya ujadte dekh ke bhi ham chup rahe....
chand sitaro ko kyo latee ho khawab me tum
ye to rahte hai sadiyo se agosh me asmaan ke
veeraniyo ko yad karte ho kyo ishk karne se pahale hee
fasale to katam hojayenge dil me kisiko basakar to dekho tum
Choudhary....
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«Reply #33 on: May 24, 2007, 06:05:55 AM » |
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Punam, Netra
Bahut achche !
Bahut achcha laga aap dono ka likha padh kar !
Punam :arrow: keep going Hi tanku ji ...aap ka ashirwaad raha aur ...sath raha toh hum likhenge hi... |
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«Reply #34 on: May 24, 2007, 06:11:25 AM » |
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meri khamoshi ko berukhi na samjho
mera dil ki haal toh samjho
aaj armano me kuch saaj na jorungi
dil ki baat na kholungi main aap khud samjho...
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«Reply #35 on: May 24, 2007, 08:54:59 AM » |
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meri khamoshi ko berukhi na samjho
mera dil ki haal toh samjho
aaj armano me kuch saaj na jorungi
dil ki baat na kholungi main aap khud samjho... kitna hansee sma ho gya hai baharo ka yaro mera mahboob mujhe milgya hai aaj dekho yaro nhi jana tha jo kha use ankho kee jubaan se aaj smajha hoo aye mailk badee muddatto se nadaan tha n samaj saka tha bebsee uskee dartee thee jamane me pyar kee ruswayeeo se yaro |
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«Reply #36 on: May 25, 2007, 06:50:29 AM » |
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khwabo ke raha pe khushiyon ki umeed hai
dil ki dharkano ko manjil ki talash hai
khitij abhi dikhti hi nahi ...bahat dur hai...
yeh raha me kante bhi hai jisme hame chalna hai..
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«Reply #37 on: May 25, 2007, 08:51:27 AM » |
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khwabo ke raha pe khushiyon ki umeed hai
dil ki dharkano ko manjil ki talash hai
khitij abhi dikhti hi nahi ...bahat dur hai...
yeh raha me kante bhi hai jisme hame chalna hai.. kanto se kyo darte hao jab saath hamara hai
fool se bhar denge rah ko musafir kee ham yaro
kanto par ham chalenge ye takkluf hamara hai......
netra....
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«Reply #38 on: May 28, 2007, 06:54:21 AM » |
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aaj lehro jaisa haal hamara
na mila na milega leher kinare se kabhi
naseeb me nahi kinare se milna
kosish karti rehti hai fir bhi
milne ki aas maan me lekar hum jeete to hain par
fhasle darmiyan hai itne ke hum na mil payenge kabhi..
Naseeb me likha hai yehi hamara
par yeh dil bhi dekho pagal hai..
milne ki aas leke baitha hai..jane deta hi nahi kabhi...
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«Reply #39 on: May 28, 2007, 08:46:24 AM » |
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Netra ji and Punam...
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«Reply #40 on: May 28, 2007, 08:52:25 AM » |
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aaj lehro jaisa haal hamara
na mila na milega leher kinare se kabhi
naseeb me nahi kinare se milna
kosish karti rehti hai fir bhi
milne ki aas maan me lekar hum jeete to hain par
fhasle darmiyan hai itne ke hum na mil payenge kabhi..
Naseeb me likha hai yehi hamara
par yeh dil bhi dekho pagal hai..
milne ki aas leke baitha hai..jane deta hi nahi kabhi... lahar bankar kyo ate ho tum jindgee me bankar badal baras jayo tum mer jindgee me naseeb kee bat kayar karte hai ashik nahee.. pyar karne walo to mil jate hai dekho har kahi faasale badane se nahi badte hai lahro kee tarah kshitij kee tarah milo jindgi me jami or asmaa ki tarah netra... |
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«Reply #41 on: May 31, 2007, 02:20:51 PM » |
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kya gham hai dil me kisi ko bata nahi sakti
ankho ki aansoo kisi ko dikha bhi nahi sakti
waise mila bhi toh kya mila pyaar me mujhe
dard mila itna par bewafa bhi unhe kehe nahi sakti
zamane ke swaal ka jawaab bhi kya dun
main jee rahi hun kyun yeh kehe nahi sakti...
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«Reply #42 on: June 02, 2007, 01:10:28 PM » |
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kya gham hai dil me kisi ko bata nahi sakti
ankho ki aansoo kisi ko dikha bhi nahi sakti
waise mila bhi toh kya mila pyaar me mujhe
dard mila itna par bewafa bhi unhe kehe nahi sakti
zamane ke swaal ka jawaab bhi kya dun
main jee rahi hun kyun yeh kehe nahi sakti... ashik to sote hai gamo ke samandar me skoon milta hai unhe dafan hokar hee kabr me gamo ke thapedo se darte hai wo aashik nahi hote aashik ko to aata hai maja kurbaan hokar asheeki me netra... |
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«Reply #43 on: June 03, 2007, 07:57:54 AM » |
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kya gham hai dil me kisi ko bata nahi sakti
ankho ki aansoo kisi ko dikha bhi nahi sakti
waise mila bhi toh kya mila pyaar me mujhe
dard mila itna par bewafa bhi unhe kehe nahi sakti
zamane ke swaal ka jawaab bhi kya dun
main jee rahi hun kyun yeh kehe nahi sakti... ashik to sote hai gamo ke samandar me skoon milta hai unhe dafan hokar hee kabr me gamo ke thapedo se darte hai wo aashik nahi hote aashik ko to aata hai maja kurbaan hokar asheeki me @aashik to wo hai jo mehboob ki galtio ko bi tarashta hai, jo tanhaiyo mai bhi apne yaar ki yaad ke sath naachta hai, yeh hi to khumaar e ishq hai tu dekh aashiq mar kr bhi to apne mehboob ko hi talaashta hai |
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«Reply #44 on: June 04, 2007, 04:37:24 AM » |
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kya gham hai dil me kisi ko bata nahi sakti
ankho ki aansoo kisi ko dikha bhi nahi sakti
waise mila bhi toh kya mila pyaar me mujhe
dard mila itna par bewafa bhi unhe kehe nahi sakti
zamane ke swaal ka jawaab bhi kya dun
main jee rahi hun kyun yeh kehe nahi sakti... ashik to sote hai gamo ke samandar me skoon milta hai unhe dafan hokar hee kabr me gamo ke thapedo se darte hai wo aashik nahi hote aashik ko to aata hai maja kurbaan hokar asheeki me @aashik to wo hai jo mehboob ki galtio ko bi tarashta hai, jo tanhaiyo mai bhi apne yaar ki yaad ke sath naachta hai, yeh hi to khumaar e ishq hai tu dekh aashiq mar kr bhi to apne mehboob ko hi talaashta hai good reply dear, keep writing aashik to taraste hai mahaboob kee jhalk ko
kismat se bhee nahi milte hai mahboob ek palko
ham to tayaar the sang marne ko saath aashik ke
hamne to naibhyee the kasam wo n aye the mayat me
bhee sirf ek pal ko
netra.....
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