yeh faqat kaisa ulaahna!

by Prateek Mardia on April 14, 2008, 05:29:41 PM
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               Mera ghaav mujhse  poochta hein
               tujhe kyon taraana soojhta hein!

               Kuch to gum se kar wafa
               youn muskuraana kroorta hein!

               Nayan- samndar-stotra bante
               kyon inhe tu moondta hein!

              Mera ghaav mujhse  poochta hein
              tujhe kyon taraana soojhta hein!

              Kuch to gum se kar wafa
              youn muskuraana kroorta hein!

              Yeh faqat kaisa ulaahana
              gungunane pe bhee taana!

              Baaten sunkar yeh pecheeda
              kuch hua mein bhee sanjeeda..

              jab nahi mujhko he shikva
              kyon tu mujhko ghoorta hein!

             Aur jaan lo, gum to hein bohut
             har hasrathon ke tootne ka..

             Aur nahi mujhme zara bhee
             pahaadon si koi shoorta hein!

             bebasi intihaan se jub guzar jaati he zaalim
             ehsaason mein tub bus shunyata hein.!

             Mera ghaav mujhse poochta hein ,
             tujhe kyon taraana soojhta hein!

             Kuch to gum se kar wafa,
             youn muskuraana krurta hein!.






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«Reply #1 on: November 17, 2008, 05:40:25 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on April 14, 2008, 05:29:41 PM
               Mera ghaav mujhse  poochta hein
               tujhe kyon taraana soojhta hein!

               Kuch to gum se kar wafa
               youn muskuraana kroorta hein!

               Nayan- samndar-stotra bante
               kyon inhe tu moondta hein!

              Mera ghaav mujhse  poochta hein
              tujhe kyon taraana soojhta hein!

              Kuch to gum se kar wafa
              youn muskuraana kroorta hein!

              Yeh faqat kaisa ulaahana
              gungunane pe bhee taana!

              Baaten sunkar yeh pecheeda
              kuch hua mein bhee sanjeeda..

              jab nahi mujhko he shikva
              kyon tu mujhko ghoorta hein!

             Aur jaan lo, gum to hein bohut
             har hasrathon ke tootne ka..

             Aur nahi mujhme zara bhee
             pahaadon si koi shoorta hein!

             bebasi intihaan se jub guzar jaati he zaalim
             ehsaason mein tub bus shunyata hein.!

             Mera ghaav mujhse poochta hein ,
             tujhe kyon taraana soojhta hein!

             Kuch to gum se kar wafa,
             youn muskuraana krurta hein!.



Waah..Prateek ji
Kya hi sundar kya hi Lay k saath..bada hi umda tarike se Taraana.. Likha Hai aapne..
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«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2008, 05:39:48 PM »
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Tahe dil se maafi chahti hu Prateek ji ki apki yah rachna main  itani der baad parr rahi hu.
Tahe dil se shukaria Muhammad ji yah kavita baher laane ke liye.

Bahoot he pyari kavita ki rachna ki hai apne Prateek ji... khas kar yah lines to dil ko chu gai:

bebasi intihaan se jub guzar jaati he zaalim
ehsaason mein tub bus shunyata hein.!
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«Reply #3 on: November 24, 2008, 11:37:28 AM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on November 17, 2008, 05:40:25 AM
Waah..Prateek ji
Kya hi sundar kya hi Lay k saath..bada hi umda tarike se Taraana.. Likha Hai aapne..

shukriya muhammed ji-aap tuk pahuch paaya.
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«Reply #4 on: November 24, 2008, 12:03:11 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 17, 2008, 05:39:48 PM
Tahe dil se maafi chahti hu Prateek ji ki apki yah rachna main  itani der baad parr rahi hu.
Tahe dil se shukaria Muhammad ji yah kavita baher laane ke liye.

Bahoot he pyari kavita ki rachna ki hai apne Prateek ji... khas kar yah lines to dil ko chu gai:

bebasi intihaan se jub guzar jaati he zaalim
ehsaason mein tub bus shunyata hein.!



pooja ji-agar itni si baat pur maafi maangni padegi to mujhe to bus roz aakar maafinaama hi likh likh kar jaana padega.

shukriya ki aapni kavita ko saraha.
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2008, 06:25:34 AM »
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waiting for more from you Prateek ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2008, 01:58:27 PM »
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Bohat Badhiya Prateek Ji,.
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waiting for more from you Prateek ji

ji main bhee khud ki wait kar raha hu,sabne aapki jaisi super duper speed kahan paayi hai,hume to mahino lug jaate hai.

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Bohat Badhiya Prateek Ji,.

Bahut shukriaa Jaanasheen ji.
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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2009, 06:20:12 PM »
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Ab to kai mahine ho gaye Prateek ji... kuch to likhein app
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Kitne dard bhare hai aapke kalam mein Prateek ji bohat khoob... Thumbs UP
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Quote from: Pooja on January 06, 2009, 06:20:12 PM
Ab to kai mahine ho gaye Prateek ji... kuch to likhein app

Aap kuch ki baat kar rahi hai,main to sub kuch likhne ki soch raha hu!!
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 11, 2009, 11:50:32 AM
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Kitne dard bhare hai aapke kalam mein Prateek ji bohat khoob... Thumbs UP

daad ke liye shukriya honeyroseji.
Kabhi kabhi dard ko syaahi bana leta hu kalam ki,bus.
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on January 11, 2009, 07:00:44 PM
Aap kuch ki baat kar rahi hai,main to sub kuch likhne ki soch raha hu!!

apka yah sab kuch kab padne ko naseeb hoga... yah bhi bata dijiye!!
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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2009, 08:40:18 AM »
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prateek ji ....bahoot saadagi, sunder shabd aur sawal ghaav ka....wah agar aapke naam ke bagair bhi ye kavita mai kahin padhta to bata deta ki iska janm aapki kalam se hi hua hai......behad umda...
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on April 14, 2008, 05:29:41 PM
               Mera ghaav mujhse  poochta hein
               tujhe kyon taraana soojhta hein!

               Kuch to gum se kar wafa
               youn muskuraana kroorta hein!

               Nayan- samndar-stotra bante
               kyon inhe tu moondta hein!

              Mera ghaav mujhse  poochta hein
              tujhe kyon taraana soojhta hein!

              Kuch to gum se kar wafa
              youn muskuraana kroorta hein!

              Yeh faqat kaisa ulaahana
              gungunane pe bhee taana!

              Baaten sunkar yeh pecheeda
              kuch hua mein bhee sanjeeda..

              jab nahi mujhko he shikva
              kyon tu mujhko ghoorta hein!

             Aur jaan lo, gum to hein bohut
             har hasrathon ke tootne ka..

             Aur nahi mujhme zara bhee
             pahaadon si koi shoorta hein!

             bebasi intihaan se jub guzar jaati he zaalim
             ehsaason mein tub bus shunyata hein.!

             Mera ghaav mujhse poochta hein ,
             tujhe kyon taraana soojhta hein!

             Kuch to gum se kar wafa,
             youn muskuraana krurta hein!.








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