Zakham

by Bharat on July 22, 2005, 02:02:26 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 25, 2005, 04:09:42 PM »
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arre shukriya ji..aur aap is glatafaimi me na rehna ke im a gud shayari ji...toota futta bas likhti hoon thats it!  :D

bohot acha likha apne:

kaise malum hota hume bewafai ke bare me,
jab wafa ke siwa aur kuch karna sikha hi nahin,
kaise kisi aur se dil laga le tere jane ke baad, bewafa,
jab ke tere siwa is dil ne machalna sikha hi nahin!


pari ho hoor ho likhti ho jakaas sanam
khoob pirone ate hai lafzo mein jazbaat sanam !! Winking

aap ke sher pe arz hai !! !

niba rhey hai aaj talak hum waffa unsey
bevffai ka aaj hum pe ilzaam lga rhey hai
tum de gaye woh jo meri kismat mein tha
jo tumhare naseeb mein hai hum diye ja rhey hai !!
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«Reply #16 on: July 25, 2005, 04:14:24 PM »
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oye hoye humtum ji..jawab nahin apka!!! bohot ache!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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«Reply #17 on: July 25, 2005, 04:17:56 PM »
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oye hoye humtum ji..jawab nahin apka!!! bohot ache!!!!!!!!!!

 :D


kuch likh bhi dijiye Meena ji hum muntzir hai aap ki shayri ke
yun bas waah waah kar ke hamare zakhmo pe namak na lgao !!!
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«Reply #18 on: July 26, 2005, 02:39:08 AM »
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Hello Meenaji,

Gur hume malum hota, woh ek sapna hai hakikat nahi
to hum un se dil na lagate jise pyar ki koi keemat nahi


Sirf dilo ko todana jante hai ye sangdil sanam
Us bewafa se etbaar ki aas kya jise wafa ki aahmiyat nahi


wah ji wah!!

aksar dokha khaya humne haqiqat aur sapne me,
isslyie armano ko door kahi dafna diya humne ek kapde me,
khud pe barosa hi na aab jabse hogaye woh bewafa,
kaun jane kaun hai gair aab, kiska nam le apno me!!



All of you, very nicely written......
Appreciated
Meenaji, Humtumji, Natural


Is matlabi jahan me koi kisi ka hota nahi
Gairo se gila kaisa jab aapno ne sath chhod diya

Din lagta hai baras ke saman in tanhaiho me
Nindo se shikwa kaisa jab sapno ne sath chhod diya
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«Reply #19 on: July 27, 2005, 04:22:58 PM »
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thank u bharat ji and very nice once again!!

jante to hai ke koi faida nahin, phir bhi gila karte hai,
koi bewafa ho bhi jaye to kya, hum phir bhi unse acha sila karte hai!
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«Reply #20 on: July 27, 2005, 08:03:25 PM »
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jante to hai ke koi faida nahin, phir bhi gila karte hai,
koi bewafa ho bhi jaye to kya, hum phir bhi unse acha sila karte hai!


Kiya baat hai Meena !! Bahot achche !!
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«Reply #21 on: July 28, 2005, 12:37:13 PM »
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dil diya tha hamne usko dildar samajhkar
pyar kiya tha usko sapna samajhkar
hame kya pata tha vo bewafa niklega
usne hamara dil toda bekar samajhkar
.............................yogesh
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Meena
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«Reply #22 on: July 28, 2005, 04:54:48 PM »
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shukriya immi ji....gud yogesh ji..................

 :D
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«Reply #23 on: July 29, 2005, 06:55:12 AM »
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bahoot achhay meena ji and love ji....bharat ji wah kya baat hai....
meena ji shikwe gile toh zidagi ka ek hissa hain...lo ek ashayar aapke naam kerta hoon..zara gaour farmaayie ga....

shikwe-gile jo kutchh bhi hain,
tuzhko bhi hain muzhko bhi hain.
pareshaanian jo kutchh bhi hain,
tuzhko bhi hain muzhko bhi hain.
muzhko rahega umra bhar,
is toot te rishte ka gam.
mazboorian jo kutchh bhi hain,
tuzhko bhi hain muzhko bhi hain.

meena wrote

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jante to hai ke koi faida nahin, phir bhi gila karte hai,
koi bewafa ho bhi jaye to kya, hum phir bhi unse acha sila karte hai!
 
 
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Meena
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«Reply #24 on: July 29, 2005, 01:55:58 PM »
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shuriya harsh ji.............and gud one as well!!!!

 :D
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Bharat
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«Reply #25 on: July 31, 2005, 11:24:02 PM »
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Meenaji and Harsh,
Thank you very much................
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«Reply #26 on: March 01, 2013, 07:21:03 PM »
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kya bat he
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