Zakham

by guruu on October 07, 2007, 10:53:41 AM
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Phir Koi Zakhm Laga do K main Zinda hoon abhi,
Meri Pehchan Mita do k main Zinda hoon abhi,

Mery hoty hoye Tum Ashak Bahao tu Bura Lagta hai,
Meri Ankhon ko Rula do K main Zinda hoon abhi,

Aur Kuch to tum se hargaz na diya jaayega,
Mery Marny ki dua do k main Zinda hoon abhi,
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«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2007, 06:11:11 PM »
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Very good. dil chu gaya aapka kalam...

Kisse de ilzam faisla nahi hota humse
Ek taraf sitam unka ek tarah pyar unka
Ya fir de ilzam dil ko apni berbadi ka
Jo kar baita pal ber main aitbar unka?
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2007, 12:56:30 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Guru,.
Aur Har Baar Ki tarah Roja Ji,.
Aapne Kamaal ka Likha Hai,.
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2007, 01:01:55 PM »
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Zakham Itne Haare hain Muskuraayein Kaise,.
Wo Door Itne Hain Humse Unhe Paas Bulaayein Kaise,.

Bewafaai Ko Bhi Humne Mohabbat Ka Rang Samjha,.
Ab Mile Hain Gham Kitne, Ye Sunaayein Kaise,.

Laga Kar Dil Humne Bahoot Se Chotein Khaai Hain,.
Ab Jaan Kar Anjaan Phir Dil Lagaayein Kaise,.

___________________________________-Jaanasheen-

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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2007, 08:00:35 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Guruu, Roja and Jaanasheen bahoot hi acha likha hai...

Guruu ji apke shabd dil ko chu gaye!! bahoot hi jayada dard bhara hua hai apke ke ek shabd main!!! bahoot simple words mai apne bahoot gahre dard ko bayan kiya hai... Good Creation!!!


Nice reply Roja!!!

Lil bro hamesha ki tarah bahoot acha likha hai apne!!!


Kuch likhne ki koshish kar rahi hu... pata nahi jis najriye mai likh rahi hu wo najriya app padne wale samjh payege.....

Waqat ke sath badal jaata hai sab kuch
Magar kuch jakhmo ke saye nahi jaate

Rooth kar chale jaate hai kuch sathi
Kuch kar ke bhi wapis bulaye nahi jaate

Her khushi ke pal main, chamak jaate hai do ansoo ankhon mai
Lakh puche koi, kuch jawab kabhi samjhaye nahi jaate

Marne ki khwaish mai jeete rahte hai zindagi ko
kuch sapne hote hai aise, jo kabhi ankhon se thukraye nahi jaate!!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2007, 08:21:44 PM »
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Great Pooja ji
aapse to tution lena padega  :D
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2007, 08:50:49 PM »
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App bhi kuch likhte to pata chal jaata ki tution fees kaya hogi apke liye tongue3

Mera Likha pasand karne ka shukaria!!!!

Zakhamo ke sung kabhi roye to kabhi samjhaya kiye
Her raat chand ke sath, ek ek pehar bitaya kiye

Khamosh taro se nahi ab koi shikayat hume
Unki khamoshi main, apni khamoshi ko milaya kiye

Na koi manjil ab na hi kisi raahi ka intzaar hume
Baith unke khayalo main, ab to din raat bitaya kiye

Zakhamo ke sung kabhi roye to kabhi samjhaya kiye
Her raat chand ke sath, ek ek pehar bitaya kiye!!!
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«Reply #7 on: November 01, 2007, 11:40:44 AM »
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Shukriya Didi,.
Aur Har Baar Ki Taraah Great Bayan Hai Aapka,.
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«Reply #8 on: November 01, 2007, 03:58:30 PM »
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shukria Lil Bro
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«Reply #9 on: November 02, 2007, 12:32:29 PM »
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U Are Always Welcome Didi,.
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«Reply #10 on: November 07, 2007, 07:51:52 AM »
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Quote from: "Jaanasheen"
Zakham Itne Haare hain Muskuraayein Kaise,.
Wo Door Itne Hain Humse Unhe Paas Bulaayein Kaise,.

Bewafaai Ko Bhi Humne Mohabbat Ka Rang Samjha,.
Ab Mile Hain Gham Kitne, Ye Sunaayein Kaise,.

Laga Kar Dil Humne Bahoot Se Chotein Khaai Hain,.
Ab Jaan Kar Anjaan Phir Dil Lagaayein Kaise,.

___________________________________-Jaanasheen-


bahut hi achha likha hai jaanasheen ji aapne...


muskurahat to bhadti jaati hai HAR zakham khane baad,
par jo apne hain unse door jaya nahin jata...

muhobbat ke rango ko ab tak samjha hai kisne,
iski daastan ko shabdon me bataya nahin jata...

jab laga liya dil kisi se to fir choton se darna kaisa JAANASHEEN,
jo dar gaye muhobbat karke to fir dil lagaya nahin jata...
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2007, 01:25:04 PM »
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Great Reply,. :lol:
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