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^^ Zarra Zarra Is Gulshan Ka ^^ Berahmi – Bedardi Se Apne Hi Dil Ko Saza Dunga Me Teri Bewafayi Ki Har Baat Ek Pal Me………….Bhula Dunga Me
Gul To Kya, Mahak Tak Ka Na Rahega Naam-O-Nishaan Zarra Zarra Is Gulshan Ka……….. Jala Dunga Me
Tu De Chahe Lakh Dhoke Humko Mohhabat Me Har Dard Ke Badle Wafa Ka Hi…….. Sila Dunga Me
Markar Bhi Nibhaunga Ulfat Ke Rasm-O-Riwaj Sun-o-Jaan-e-man………… Ashiq Hu Agar Tumhe Kuch Dunga To Sirf…….Dua Dunga Me
Naram Dil He Sine Me Kisi Komal Shakh Ke Jesa Dahakunga To Dhire Dhire, Lekin Bahot..…….. Dhua.n Dunga Me
Likh Diya He Har Ehsaas Dil Ka “ Utkarsh ” Ne Is Kagaj Per Yakinan Ab Aur Likha To Kasam Se…………………………………………………. ………………………………………………………………….Tum Sabko…. Rula Dunga Me
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manjum
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2011, 06:54:31 AM » |
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are metrixji ab aur kitna rula doge... jitna likha hai utne main ro diye ham... bahut badiya..... bahut khub...... maram dil hai sine main.... kya kamal kaha hai......
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2011, 09:33:15 AM » |
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ohhhhhoo itna gussa.... Aapko to gussa aata hi nahi na mg.... Fir itni shikayate.... Par likha mast hai.... Tooooooo.... Goooooood...
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2011, 09:53:39 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2011, 05:12:11 PM » |
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^^ Zarra Zarra Is Gulshan Ka ^^ Berahmi – Bedardi Se Apne Hi Dil Ko Saza Dunga Me Teri Bewafayi Ki Har Baat Ek Pal Me………….Bhula Dunga Me
Gul To Kya, Mahak Tak Ka Na Rahega Naam-O-Nishaan Zarra Zarra Is Gulshan Ka……….. Jala Dunga Me
Tu De Chahe Lakh Dhoke Humko Mohhabat Me Har Dard Ke Badle Wafa Ka Hi…….. Sila Dunga Me
Markar Bhi Nibhaunga Ulfat Ke Rasm-O-Riwaj Sun-o-Jaan-e-man………… Ashiq Hu Agar Tumhe Kuch Dunga To Sirf…….Dua Dunga Me
Naram Dil He Sine Me Kisi Komal Shakh Ke Jesa Dahakunga To Dhire Dhire, Lekin Bahot..…….. Dhua.n Dunga Me
Likh Diya He Har Ehsaas Dil Ka “ Utkarsh ” Ne Is Kagaj Per Yakinan Ab Aur Likha To Kasam Se…………………………………………………. ………………………………………………………………….Tum Sabko…. Rula Dunga Me
Kyaa Baat hai ... Bahut khoob ehsaas bayaaN kiye hai aapne ... Matrix Ji ! tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2011, 05:15:01 PM » |
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Waah ji waah utkarsh ji aajkal apke kalamo mein ishq k har ehsas ki likhawat nazar aa rahi hai kabhi dard,kabhi mhbt kabhi milan kabhi judai bahut ache...
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2011, 12:22:24 AM » |
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Berahmi – Bedardi Se Apne Hi Dil Ko Saza Dunga Me Teri Bewafayi Ki Har Baat Ek Pal Me………….Bhula Dunga Me
Gul To Kya, Mahak Tak Ka Na Rahega Naam-O-Nishaan Zarra Zarra Is Gulshan Ka……….. Jala Dunga Me
Tu De Chahe Lakh Dhoke Humko Mohhabat Me Har Dard Ke Badle Wafa Ka Hi…….. Sila Dunga Me
Markar Bhi Nibhaunga Ulfat Ke Rasm-O-Riwaj Sun-o-Jaan-e-man………… Ashiq Hu Agar Tumhe Kuch Dunga To Sirf…….Dua Dunga Me
Naram Dil He Sine Me Kisi Komal Shakh Ke Jesa Dahakunga To Dhire Dhire, Lekin Bahot..…….. Dhua.n Dunga Me
Likh Diya He Har Ehsaas Dil Ka “ Utkarsh ” Ne Is Kagaj Per Yakinan Ab Aur Likha To Kasam Se…………………………………………………. ………………………………………………………………….Tum Sabko…. Rula Dunga Me
phool saa dil liye khaaroN pe chalne waale apne naghmoN se mehfil ko rulaane waale husn be-parwaah koi fiqra nahee hai usko hosh me aa keh nahee ye to badalne waale behad asardaar or sanjeedaa kalaam Utkarsh! bahut khoob.. dheroN daad.........
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #8 on: March 18, 2011, 05:40:06 AM » |
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aap sabhi respected members ka thx a lot.........
aap logo se ye hi umiid karta hu ki agey bhi mera sath dete rahenge......parwaj sahab apki mojudgi se dil ko ek baar fir bht sukun mila he ...... manju ji...geet ji........priya dear, naresh ji, khwaish ji aur mamta ji......aap sabhi ka har lafj mere liye inaam jesa he ........keep in touch u all.........once again thx a lot
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«Reply #9 on: March 18, 2011, 06:04:16 AM » |
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ehehehehehehe......chal beee..... achhaa likha he dost par...
jane kyu ab dil rone ko nahi karta unki yad hi sare ansuu le jatii hai~
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«Reply #10 on: March 18, 2011, 11:37:33 AM » |
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #11 on: March 18, 2011, 01:29:24 PM » |
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"Ess Prakrati ne kya bigaada hai jo Gulshan ka Zarra-zarra jalaa doge....hum sab ko Mahak se mehfooj kar doge.....Gussa nikaalna hai tou be-wafaa par nikalo kudrat par nahi.....Sochna kyu socha aysa tume...kya sahi hai....?"
dear sweet koyal ji.....apke prshan he to jawab to dena hi hoga ji......
dear bura nahi manna but apne post ko samjne me bhul ki he ....shayari me theme ke anusar shabd ke meaning bhi badal jatey he.........
apne jo gulshan samja he wo koi "park ya garden nahi he dear" ye gulshan he pyar ka . love climate which has been created by two hearts in love and now it is break off.....yaha us gulshan ki baat ho rahi he.....second wala jo sawal he uska jawab ye samjne ke baad apne aap hi mil jayega ji.....
and very very thx ji for always supporting me......ese hi sath rahiyega....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #12 on: March 18, 2011, 01:55:01 PM » |
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Maaffi chahti hoon MG sach mai mujhe shayri ka itnaa gyaan nahi hai ji..... mein tou shabdik arth par he atak jaati hu..... Bas ek baat aur clear kar dijiye.....
Gulshan mai Gul...phool ya parinda hota hai..... Aapke pyaar k gulshan mai "Gul" kaun hai.... (naam nahi puchh rahi)kya second heart hai.... bas ye hejaana hai ji..... "ek thaa gul aur ek thee bulbul donon chaman mein rahate the hai ye kahaanee bilkul sachchee, mere naanaa kahate the...."
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #13 on: March 18, 2011, 04:04:25 PM » |
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koyal ji ayah gulshan kya he wo aap samaj hi gayi he so ab usi najariye se dekhiye to gul = dil (heart) aur uske agey mahak = ehsaas.....jese gul me yani phool me mahak hoti he wese hi dil me ehsaas hote he... so jiska dil tuta he (mean first heart - jisne ye feelings likhi he) wo ye kahana chahta he ki "Gul To Kya, Mahak Tak Ka Na Rahega Naam-O-Nishaan" = mean dil nahi rahega aur na isme kisi tarah ke ehsaas rahenge
Gulshan mai Gul...phool ya parinda hota hai..... Aapke pyaar k gulshan mai "Gul" kaun hai.... (naam nahi puchh rahi)kya second heart hai.... bas ye hejaana hai ji.....
and apne kaha ki naam nahi pucha to naam me bhi nahi bata sakta bcoz this is just poetry not related to anybody or to myself.....
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«Reply #14 on: May 03, 2011, 08:26:53 AM » |
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mar mitenge na tikenge aur zulm e mohbt me……… naadan the kuch anjaan the haalaat e dil ki gunaahon se……… [ meri soch kitni choti hai ] matrix ji kamaal ka post hai ji… mera bhi ek sawaal hai… aap itna acha kese likhte ho btao……
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