Zindegi -khuli kitaab!

by salma786 on March 13, 2009, 06:49:24 AM
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Dua me maine jo hath uthaya tha,
Mila wo mujhe behisaab hai,
Padna chaho to pad lo hal-e-dil,
Meri zindegi ek khuli kitaab hai!

Zindegi ko jeena maine sikh liya,
Jo mohabbat me kisi ke daga paya hai,
Mana dard to paya hai dilme gehra,
Par us bewafa ke sath bhi mera saya hai!

Haarna nahi sikhaya zindegi ne,
Majburi me ye zillat uthaya hai,
Wajah dhudne ki arzoo thi daga pane ki,
Tabhi zindegi se aj tak rishta nibhaya hai!
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2009, 10:37:28 AM »
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Hay, Kya Khoob Likha Hai yaar,.
First Fours Line And Last Two Lines Are Execellent, Behad Pasnad Aaye,.

Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne salma Ji,./
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2009, 11:12:05 AM »
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God work Salma. really very meaningful lines.
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2009, 11:14:50 AM »
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Shukriya Azeem ji !
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Thanks Sophi Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2009, 03:13:29 PM »
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waqee, Janaasheen ji ne sahee kaha, waise tho puri kaabil-e-tareef hai, magar pehla stanza aur aakhir ki do lines tho specially, mastermind work!
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2009, 05:52:07 PM »
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Bahut khoob Salma Ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2009, 06:08:43 PM »
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Achhi Rachna hai aapki..... Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: salma786 on March 13, 2009, 06:49:24 AM
Dua me maine jo hath uthaya tha,
Mila wo mujhe behisaab hai,
Padna chaho to pad lo hal-e-dil,
Meri zindegi ek khuli kitaab hai!

Zindegi ko jeena maine sikh liya,
Jo mohabbat me kisi ke daga paya hai,
Mana dard to paya hai dilme gehra,
Par us bewafa ke sath bhi mera saya hai!

Haarna nahi sikhaya zindegi ne,
Majburi me ye zillat uthaya hai,
Wajah dhudne ki arzoo thi daga pane ki,
Tabhi zindegi se aj tak rishta nibhaya hai!
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«Reply #8 on: March 14, 2009, 06:03:27 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on March 13, 2009, 03:13:29 PM
waqee, Janaasheen ji ne sahee kaha, waise tho puri kaabil-e-tareef hai, magar pehla stanza aur aakhir ki do lines tho specially, mastermind work!

Thanks Anjaan ji!
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«Reply #9 on: March 14, 2009, 06:04:33 AM »
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Shukriya Rajeshh ji!
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Quote from: smardia on March 13, 2009, 06:08:43 PM
Achhi Rachna hai aapki..... Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya !
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«Reply #11 on: March 14, 2009, 06:42:54 AM »
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zindgi kohli kitaab nahi
dard itnay miltay hain k hisab nahi
zindgi kya hay, aik aisa hay sawal
baray baray dansah waron k pass jiss ka jawab nahi
zindgi chahaye lakh sitm karay phir b sb jeena chahtay hain
kitni ajeeb bat hy payar marnay ko koi bay tabb nahi
zindgi kohli kitab nahi
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«Reply #12 on: March 15, 2009, 01:12:37 PM »
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nice one payar ji!
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Quote from: salma786 on March 13, 2009, 06:49:24 AM
Dua me maine jo hath uthaya tha,
Mila wo mujhe behisaab hai,
Padna chaho to pad lo hal-e-dil,
Meri zindegi ek khuli kitaab hai!

Zindegi ko jeena maine sikh liya,
Jo mohabbat me kisi ke daga paya hai,
Mana dard to paya hai dilme gehra,
Par us bewafa ke sath bhi mera saya hai!

Haarna nahi sikhaya zindegi ne,
Majburi me ye zillat uthaya hai,
Wajah dhudne ki arzoo thi daga pane ki,
Tabhi zindegi se aj tak rishta nibhaya hai!



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