~: Zindgee aur Tum :~

by chitra on May 19, 2010, 08:47:07 PM
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Nigaahe mili fir pyaar hua, fir badaa aur badata gya.
Dhadkane mili fir saanse,do zindgiyo ka ek rishta hua.

Mausam badala fir waqt badla, faasalaa bhi badta gya,
Dooriya majbooriya bani , fir Pyar humara ruswa hua.

Naasamjh ye nadaan dil tumse, wafaa ki ummeede karta gya
Ye intzaar mein dhadkta rahaa,dilbar Tumhara koi dusra hua.

Main bhi naye rasto par chali, par tumhaara saaya saath gya
Jab uthaai nazre uske liye to, tumhara hi chehara samne hua.

Main sunti rahi khamousi se sab, jo kuch Wo kahata gya.
Lag rahaa tha har ek lafz mujhe, teri jubaa se hi nikla hua.

Har lamha wo kareeb aaya mere, fir  baaho mein bharta gya.
Uske seene ka shor bhi laga, k Tumhari dhadkano ka koi Saaz hua.

Zindgee yu hi chalti rahi, har waqt uske saath gujar gya.
Jab bhi rahi uske kareeb main, Tumhari ruh ka hi ehsaas hua.

Wo mujhme wafaa dekhta gya aur,dil tumse wafaa karta gya.
Zindgee unke saath rahi par, har lamha tera sirf tera hua..!


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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2010, 10:09:25 PM »
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Wah wah Chitra ji,bahut hi khoob,mindblowing creation,excellent,bahut acha likhti hai aap.keep it up Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2010, 10:43:30 PM »
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aaj dilwale apne fasane sunane chale aae hain bazm main...
koi pabandii na laga ,betakaluff guftagu hojaane de.....

aaj ki mehfil dil walaoon ki hai ....khoob
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2010, 11:21:23 PM »
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sach kahun to main ek baar padh ke apki kavita samajh nahi paaya... maine dusri baar padha... dusri baar padhne ke baad itna pyaara laga ki 3-4 baar aur padha... badi hi khoobsurti se aapne apne dard ko mohabbat bataya hai... kya kehne aapki is kavita ke... bahut hi umda... maan gaye Chitra ji aapki kalam ke zor ko... bahut khoob...!!!
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tum mohabbat mujhse karti ho par mere chehre me kisi aur ko talaashti ho tum,
tumhaara sab kuch main hoon par fir bhi jaane kyun kuch aur hi chahti ho tum,
afsos mujhe is baat ka nahi ki tum meri hote huye bhi meri nahi ho meri jaan,
afsos to bas is baat ka hai ki jo tumhaara na ho saka kabhi use maangti ho tum...
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2010, 04:30:57 AM »
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shukriya Madhu jee..klaskar jee..nazar jee...!

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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2010, 04:46:48 AM »
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aaj dilwale apne fasane sunane chale aae hain bazm main...
koi pabandii na laga ,betakaluff guftagu hojaane de.....

aaj ki mehfil dil walaoon ki hai ....khoob

sahi farmaaya hai apne

Dilwaalo ka dard yu hi bayaa hota hai
Likh do kaagaz pe to , kam mahsoos hota hai
Ye asar un bewafa ki bewafaaiiyo ka hai
Ke har lafz aaj dard mein dooba hota hai
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2010, 05:01:02 AM »
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sach kahun to main ek baar padh ke apki kavita samajh nahi paaya... maine dusri baar padha... dusri baar padhne ke baad itna pyaara laga ki 3-4 baar aur padha... badi hi khoobsurti se aapne apne dard ko mohabbat bataya hai... kya kehne aapki is kavita ke... bahut hi umda... maan gaye Chitra ji aapki kalam ke zor ko... bahut khoob...!!!
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

tum mohabbat mujhse karti ho par mere chehre me kisi aur ko talaashti ho tum,
tumhaara sab kuch main hoon par fir bhi jaane kyun kuch aur hi chahti ho tum,
afsos mujhe is baat ka nahi ki tum meri hote huye bhi meri nahi ho meri jaan,
afsos to bas is baat ka hai ki jo tumhaara na ho saka kabhi use maangti ho tum...


ajee koi baat nahi...k waqt lag gya..par mujhe khushi hai ke samjh to aaya...!!
apne kya khoob likhaa...aap meri lines ko bahoot achchhi tarha se samjhe hai...!

main wahaa hoon jahaa sab is dil ke haatho mein hai
uske siwa koi aur nahi ,wo hi mere khwabo mein hai,
janti hoon saath doge mera har kadam par yu hi
par meri chaahte majbooriyo ki panaaho mein hai
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2010, 06:24:57 AM »
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Wah Kapil ji,nazar ji,Chitra ji.lovely lines,bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2010, 09:36:07 AM »
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U r welcome Chitra ji...!!!

shukriya Madhu jee..klaskar jee..nazar jee...!


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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2010, 09:36:31 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Wah Kapil ji,nazar ji,Chitra ji.lovely lines,bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2010, 09:39:39 AM »
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shukriya Chitra ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

chaahaton ko majbooriyon ka naam deke badnaam na karo,
hamari mohabbat k charche yun sare aam neelam na karo,
manzil paane ki koshish tum ne bhi ki thi aur maine bhi,
jo mila hai usme khush raho, jo na mila uska gum na karo...


ajee koi baat nahi...k waqt lag gya..par mujhe khushi hai ke samjh to aaya...!!
apne kya khoob likhaa...aap meri lines ko bahoot achchhi tarha se samjhe hai...!

main wahaa hoon jahaa sab is dil ke haatho mein hai
uske siwa koi aur nahi ,wo hi mere khwabo mein hai,
janti hoon saath doge mera har kadam par yu hi
par meri chaahte majbooriyo ki panaaho mein hai

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«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2010, 04:30:52 PM »
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waah klaskar jeee ...!

kya jawaab likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2010, 06:19:59 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Chitra ji...!!! Usual Smile

waah klaskar jeee ...!

kya jawaab likha hai aapne.

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«Reply #13 on: October 31, 2011, 10:05:38 AM »
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thanx to all....and happy diwali..!



Guzare zamaane ki wo kasak , saath mere chalti rahi
main Ek kadam chali to wo , do kadam mujhse aage rahi

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«Reply #14 on: October 31, 2011, 10:19:56 AM »
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