Zindgi ki chadar pe jitni rangrezi ki "manjum"

by manjum on January 04, 2011, 05:12:15 AM
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hi..

Zindgi ki chadar pe jitni rangrezi ki.
Gham k chhite kya jo pade sare rang dhul gaye.

Andhiyon main ud gai ghar ki chhat bhi dekhoto,
Mere sir ke upar sab aasman khul gaye.

Kya sabak sikhaya hai usne pyar karne ka,
Thode se sukun the jo aansuon main ghul gaye.
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2011, 06:08:13 AM »
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Wah manju ji bahut khub.
lekin aapse ab ek shikayat hai--
har baar aap dard bhara nagma pesh karke saddy krte ho:(
remember
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dard ko seene me chupao to
                baat hai
arsru ko aankhon me dabao to
                 baat hai
uss par bhi sanam jhum ke muskurao to
                  baat hai
kaagaz ke phoolon ko bhi mahkao to
                  baat hai
bujhte deepak se bhi chahat ki lau jalao to
                  baat hai
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thanx
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khus rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2011, 06:59:18 AM »
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oh ho... Niralaji dukhi mat hoiye..

dard hi to jeevan ki sachchai hai..

chalie agli bar kuch khushnuma likhne ki koshish karti hun.

thanks

bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2011, 07:03:17 AM »
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wawwww
ab hum bahut khus hue
Usual SmileUsual Smile
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chaliye iss khusi me thoda muskura len
apne gamo ko thoda bhula len
dil ke armaano ko thoda aur hawa den
aasuon se kahen--
aye aansu mere dost thoda wait kar zara hum muskura khilkhila len--:)Usual Smile
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thanx
""
khus rahen sada
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2011, 07:07:43 AM »
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thanks... Niralaji
chaiye 5 mint main naya post milne wala hai intzar kijie likh rahe hain..

aap mushkurate rahie sada
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2011, 07:13:40 AM »
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kehte sunte beet gai raat saari
na chahte hue bhi ashk behte rahe
tumhari baahon me ane ko ee sanam
dekho na sari raat hum taraste rahe.....
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2011, 07:17:03 AM »
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thnaks kasakji...
bahut bahut shukriya.... daad dete rahen
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2011, 07:26:21 AM »
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kuch kosis hai K mam aapke lines ke jawaab me
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tarase the hum bhi raat saari
ilm kaha hui aapko beqaraari ki humari
         kah na sake hum lafzom me kya thi haalat
         ee sanam kuch ashq gire aur sukh gaye
yakeen na ho fir jhank lo
 zara aankhon me humari
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thanx
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manju ji m waiting for ur new post
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2011, 07:36:17 AM »
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are niralaji bheja na... aankhon se hi chhu lete ho...

wo ankhe jin mai kabhi ham basa karte the.
wahin aaj dhekho gair rahte hain.
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2011, 07:43:30 AM »
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aankho ka to pata nhi
    lafzon me aapke hum marte hain
kya fark padta hai gar
    aankhon me aapki koi aur baste hain--:)Usual SmileWinkingWinkingUsual Smile
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thanx
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2011, 07:47:44 AM »
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wah...ji kya baat hai..

kitna likhwayege mujhse?Huh???

apne sinw main meri yad basaye rakhna.
apne hotho pe mera nna msajae rakhna.

ye jo anjana sa nata hai tujhse mera,
meri koshish hai ye nata banae rakhna.
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2011, 07:55:51 AM »
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bht khoob manjum ji..
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2011, 07:56:45 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya manzilji...

khush rahie sada..
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«Reply #13 on: January 04, 2011, 08:08:52 AM »
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aapse hum aaj bahut likhwayenge ji.
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chahe aapki kalam toot jaye
ya chahe aapka paper khatam ho jaye
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thanx
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«Reply #14 on: January 04, 2011, 08:12:21 AM »
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ham likhne ke lie taiyar hain ji....

kagaz aur kalam ki kya baat hai.
ye khatm ho bhi jaen to dil to hai.
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