Zindgi kya ajab paheli thi....

by manjum on December 28, 2010, 03:50:28 AM
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Zindgi kya ajab paheli thi.
iski koi nahin saheli thi.

Hamne khaye the zakhm sine par,
Aur har chot dil pe jheli thi.

Thi bahut tez dhup rahon main,
Dur tak main bahut akeli thi.

Dur se ham palat hi aaye the,
Chaal kuchh usne aisi kheli thi.

Ek samndar diya tha ashkon ka,
Har khushi usne meri leli thi.

manju "Mann"
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Bahut khoob manjum ji...
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bahut bahut shukriya... sirji
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Manjum jee AadaaB!

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Quote from: manjum on December 28, 2010, 03:50:28 AM

Thi bahut tez dhup rahon main,
Dur tak main bahut akeli thi.

Dur se ham palat hi aaye the,
Chaal kuchh usne aisi kheli thi.

manju "Mann"
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2010, 09:29:20 AM »
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Aadaab parwaazji

shukriya bahu bahut shukriya... qouted ashaar ke lie sukriya.. pr wo shayari ka hissa nahin hai wo mera hissa hai... jo aapko acha laga

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Bahut Khub..
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bahut bahut shukriya Rishiji...
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bht achhci peshkash manjum ji....
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«Reply #10 on: December 29, 2010, 06:05:47 AM »
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lajawaab Peshkash Manjum ji.
apne man ke Kuch lahraate Zazbaaton ko aapne bakhubi kalambaddh kiya.
daad kubool kijiye Mohtarma aur hame kritarth kijiye.
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shukriya KBji

aapki daad sar aankon par....

daad dete rahen..
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bahut khoob manju ji.
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bahut bahut shukriya Sureshji...

aapne aaj ek sath meri sari rachnaye pad rahe hain aur daad bhi de rahe hain... shukriya bahut bahut...

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Bahut Bahut Khoooob Manjuji..

Ehsaaso Se Bharpoor..Bahut Hi khoobsurat

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