आँखों से/AankhoN se...............................SAINI

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मसल:दिल का एक पुराना जब आ उलझा आँखों से |

क़तरा–क़तरा एक समुंदर बह-बह निकला आँखों से ||
 

लगती थी वो हमे हसीना बिलकुल अबला आँखों  से |

जाने क्या उसको सूझा वो कर गई हमला आँखों से ||
 

ख़त वो मेरे पढ़ लेता है बिलकुल नीम  अँधेरे  में |

पर मेरे आगे हो जाता इकदम  दुबला आँखों  से ||
 

पैमाना लेकर ख़ाली  हम  बैठे  थे भिखमंगे  से |

जब औरों को ख़ूब पिलाई उसने मदिरा आँखों से ||
 

बरसों से जो  देख रहा था ‘सैनी’क़ाबिल होने का |

आँधी एसी वक़्त की आई सपना बिखरा आँखों से ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी  

 
Maslaa dil kaa ek puraanaa jab aa  uljhaa  aankhoN se.
Qatraa –qatraa ek samunder bah  bah niklaa aankhoN se.

Lagtee thee vo hameN haseenaa bilkul ablaa aankhoN se.
Jaane  kyaa usko soojhaa vo kar gai hamlaa aankhoN se.

Khat vo mere  padh  letaa hai bilkul neem andhere meN.
Par  mere   aage  ho  jaataa  ikdam dublaa aankhon se.

Paimaanaa lekar khaalee ham  baithe the bhikhmange se.
Jab  auroN  ko  khoob pilaai usne  madiraa aankhoN se.

BarsoN se jo dekh rahaa thaa ‘saini’ qaabil  hone kaa.
Aandhee  esee vaqt kee aai sapnaa bikhraa  aankhoN se.

Dr.Surendra Saini  
 
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«Reply #1 on: March 29, 2012, 06:24:03 AM »
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What a good poetry.
I think last se pahli 2 line dil ko cho jati h.
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«Reply #2 on: March 29, 2012, 06:45:47 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob sk ji.....daad...Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 29, 2012, 07:34:34 AM »
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aap shaayari ki legacy ko genuinely aage le jaa rahe hain, ssahab!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2012, 07:37:23 AM »
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aap shaayari ki legacy ko genuinely aage le jaa rahe hain, ssahab!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: March 29, 2012, 07:40:29 AM »
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bahut khoob saini ji baht badhiya likha aapne...
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«Reply #6 on: March 29, 2012, 07:43:48 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2012, 08:20:55 AM »
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very nice..good poetry
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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2012, 04:07:02 PM »
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Maasoom ji shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: March 29, 2012, 04:15:45 PM »
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पैमाना लेकर ख़ाली  हम  बैठे  थे भिखमंगे  से |

जब औरों को ख़ूब पिलाई उसने मदिरा आँखों से || Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Khoob Surendra Sir
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«Reply #10 on: March 29, 2012, 04:30:05 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob Saini ji...!!!
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«Reply #11 on: March 29, 2012, 07:10:00 PM »
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 Applause Applause
 bahut khoob !!
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«Reply #12 on: March 29, 2012, 07:25:09 PM »
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Very good sir....aisse hi likhte rahen....
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Dolly ji shukriya
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Himaanshu ji thanks
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