ऐ मेरी जान

by Bhupinder Kaur on March 23, 2013, 11:40:15 PM

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Bhupinder Kaur

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ऐ मेरी जान
मुझसे जी जान से नफरत कर
हस्ती भी न रहें मेरी
कुछ ऐसे हमपर वार कर
दे बदुआ हमें दिलसे
और अपना दर्द भी
हमारे नाम कर
मौत को हिचकिचाना ना पड़े
कुछ ऐसा हमपर एह्सान कर....


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marhoom bahayaat

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Re: ऐ मेरी जान

«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2013, 11:45:58 PM »

Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on March 23, 2013, 11:40:15 PM

ऐ मेरी जान
मुझसे जी जान से नफरत कर
हस्ती भी न रहें मेरी
कुछ ऐसे हमपर वार कर
दे बदुआ हमें दिलसे
और अपना दर्द भी
हमारे नाम कर
मौत को हिचकिचाना ना पड़े
कुछ ऐसा हमपर एह्सान कर....

gr88,ma'am


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«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2013, 01:01:07 AM »

it was heart throbing bhupinder.... Applause


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«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2013, 02:00:54 AM »

Atee Sunder


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«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2013, 08:02:55 AM »

bahut khoob


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Re: ऐ मेरी जान

«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2013, 01:07:57 PM »

Nice lines
Applause


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«Reply #8 on: March 24, 2013, 05:18:17 PM »

Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on March 23, 2013, 11:40:15 PM

bahut khoob


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Re: ऐ मेरी जान

«Reply #9 on: March 24, 2013, 05:59:06 PM »

bohut bohut dard bhari lines but realy good ,,,, very imresive keep writing dear


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«Reply #10 on: March 24, 2013, 07:58:31 PM »

bahut khoob.


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