कल तक मैकदे में - ""बेताब"

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बेखुदी में मुस्कराने की सजा पाई है,
प्यार में दिल लगाने की सजा पाई है.

ग़म की राहों में दो पल साथ क्या दिया मैंने,
उम्र भर साथ निभाने की सजा पाई है.

हाले दिल तुमको क्या सुनाऊँ "बेताब",
हाले दिल उनको बताने की सजा पाई है.

सबक लेना है तो लाश जले हुए परवाने की देखो,
जिसने शमा के पास जाने की सजा पाई है.

कल तक मैकदे में बोतल से पीया करते थे,
आज साकी की नज़रों से पीने की सजा पाई है.

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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2013, 09:52:53 AM »
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Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on June 10, 2013, 09:27:51 AM
बेखुदी में मुस्कराने की सजा पाई है,
प्यार में दिल लगाने की सजा पाई है.

ग़म की राहों में दो पल साथ क्या दिया मैंने,
उम्र भर साथ निभाने की सजा पाई है.

हाले दिल तुमको क्या सुनाऊँ "बेताब",
हाले दिल उनको बताने की सजा पाई है.

सबक लेना है तो लाश जले हुए परवाने की देखो,
जिसने शमा के पास जाने की सजा पाई है.

कल तक मैकदे में बोतल से पीया करते थे,
आज साकी की नज़रों से पीने की सजा पाई है.

          Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab"

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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2013, 12:24:06 PM »
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bahut khoobsoorat kalaam dheron daad
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Behad khoobsurat rachna hai saxena sahab..daad aur rau dono qubool kare..happy9
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bahut khoob Betab sahib.achhi ghazal hai.
... lekin maqta darmyan mein kyuun ?
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Khobsurat.


Keep writing Saxena Sahab.
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bahut achchi kalaam rahi. likhte rahiye. dheron daad.
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