टूटा दिल... अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

by amit_prakash_meet on May 19, 2012, 07:01:04 PM
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की थी जिस से मोहब्बत, उसी ने तो दिल है तोड़ा
मोहब्बत क्या करें, अब इस ने कहीं का नहीं छोड़ा
 
अब इस टूटे दिल को लेकर, फिरते हैं दर-बदर
ढूँढ़ते हैं उसे, जिसने इस ज़िन्दगी का रुख है मोड़ा
 
किससे करें शिकवा, और किससे करें शिकायत
नहीं मिलता वो, जिसने दोराहे पर लाकर है छोड़ा
 
कोई मंजिल नहीं दिखती, न रास्ता नज़र आता
इस दुनिया में "मीत", किसने टूटे दिल को है जोड़ा    
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2012, 03:29:15 AM »
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Bahut khoob..
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2012, 05:33:09 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2012, 05:33:42 AM »
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Waah..waah..Meet Ji, likha to khoob hai aapne, par is toote dil ki kya dava dein aapko, bas uparwale se yahi dua hai aapko khush rakhe
की थी जिस से मोहब्बत, उसी ने तो दिल है तोड़ा
मोहब्बत क्या करें, अब इस ने कहीं का नहीं छोड़ा
 
अब इस टूटे दिल को लेकर, फिरते हैं दर-बदर
ढूँढ़ते हैं उसे, जिसने इस ज़िन्दगी का रुख है मोड़ा
 
किससे करें शिकवा, और किससे करें शिकायत
नहीं मिलता वो, जिसने दोराहे पर लाकर है छोड़ा
 
कोई मंजिल नहीं दिखती, न रास्ता नज़र आता
इस दुनिया में "मीत", किसने टूटे दिल को है जोड़ा   

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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2012, 06:43:37 AM »
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Thanks a lot MKV Ji
Bahut khoob..

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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2012, 07:47:48 AM »
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Thanka a lot Saini Ji
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2012, 01:46:49 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Amit ji....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2012, 11:18:37 AM »
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Thanks a lot Goldy Ji
Waah..waah..Meet Ji, likha to khoob hai aapne, par is toote dil ki kya dava dein aapko, bas uparwale se yahi dua hai aapko khush rakhe
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2012, 11:13:01 AM »
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Thank you very much Hriday Ji
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Amit ji....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 24, 2012, 11:29:09 AM »
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Thanks a lot each & every one who have read & appreciated
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