तन्हाई - By "Betaab".

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जब जब तेरी याद मुझको सताती है,
मेरी तन्हाई और भी बढ़ जाती है.

आहटों से इस कदर सहम गया हूँ,
पत्तों की सरसराहट से भी मेरी रूह काँप जाती है.

जब जब मैं तनहा बैठा करता हूँ,
यादों के कारवां की तस्वीर उभर आती है.

खूने दिल से दिए जला रहा हूँ ,
आंधी है कि दिया बुझा जाती है.

दम निकलने में कितना मजा होता है,
यह बात मुझको अब समझ में आती है.

Jab jab teri yaad satati hai,
Meri tanhai aur bhi badh jaati hai.

Ahton se is kadar saham gaya hoon main,
Patton ki sarsarhat se bhi meri rooh kanp jati hai.

Jab jab main tanha baitha karta hoon,
Yaadon ke karwan ki tasbeer ubhar ati hai.

Khoone dil se diye jala raha hoon,
Andhi hai jo diya bujha jati hai.

Dam nikalne mein kitna maja hota hai,
Yeh baat mujhko ab samajh mein ati hia.

    Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2014, 08:14:46 PM »
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bahut khub saxsena ji behad badhiya qalaam.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2014, 09:02:07 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2014, 09:06:39 PM »
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Bahut khooooooooooooob saxena ji... dheron daaaaad...
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2014, 09:15:05 PM »
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Bahut badiya Saxena Saheb Usual Smile
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Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on March 10, 2014, 08:01:01 PM
जब जब तेरी याद मुझको सताती है,
मेरी तन्हाई और भी बढ़ जाती है.

आहटों से इस कदर सहम गया हूँ,
पत्तों की सरसराहट से भी मेरी रूह काँप जाती है.

जब जब मैं तनहा बैठा करता हूँ,
यादों के कारवां की तस्वीर उभर आती है.

खूने दिल से दिए जला रहा हूँ ,
आंधी है कि दिया बुझा जाती है.

दम निकलने में कितना मजा होता है,
यह बात मुझको अब समझ में आती है.

Jab jab teri yaad satati hai,
Meri tanhai aur bhi badh jaati hai.

Ahton se is kadar saham gaya hoon main,
Patton ki sarsarhat se bhi meri rooh kanp jati hai.

Jab jab main tanha baitha karta hoon,
Yaadon ke karwan ki tasbeer ubhar ati hai.

Khoone dil se diye jala raha hoon,
Andhi hai jo diya bujha jati hai.

Dam nikalne mein kitna maja hota hai,
Yeh baat mujhko ab samajh mein ati hia.

    Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".

बेह्द खूबसूरत जनाब.!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 11, 2014, 12:05:42 AM »
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Bahut hi Umdah, Betaab Sahib. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #7 on: March 11, 2014, 10:00:34 AM »
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Jab jab teri yaad satati hai,
Meri tanhai aur bhi badh jaati hai.

Ahton se is kadar saham gaya hoon main,
Patton ki sarsarhat se bhi meri rooh kanp jati hai.

Jab jab main tanha baitha karta hoon,
Yaadon ke karwan ki tasbeer ubhar ati hai.

Khoone dil se diye jala raha hoon,
Andhi hai jo diya bujha jati hai.

Dam nikalne mein kitna maja hota hai,
Yeh baat mujhko ab samajh mein ati hia.
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bahut bahut khoob...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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khub kaha.....
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bahut khub saxsena ji behad badhiya qalaam.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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waah waah bahut khoob

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Bahut khooooooooooooob saxena ji... dheron daaaaad...

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