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by Raqeeb on December 28, 2011, 05:23:21 AM
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देखे थे जो ख्वाब कभी
उन ख़्वाबों  की ताबीर हो तुम|

संग चलना था  जिस राह कभी
उस राह की रह्गीर  हो तुम|

सोचे थे जो ख़याल कभी
उन  ख़यालों  की तस्वीर  हो तुम|

जिसकी तलाश में मैं था कभी
वो खोयी जागीर  हो तुम|

थी आब जैसी साफ़  कभी
अब रूठी तक़दीर  हो तुम|

क्या था ग़लत 'रक़ीब'कभी  
जो एसी बेपीर  हो तुम|
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2011, 05:36:40 AM »
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Quote from: Raqeeb on December 28, 2011, 05:23:21 AM
देखे थे जो ख्वाब कभी
उन ख़्वाबों  की ताबीर हो तुम|

संग चलना था  जिस राह कभी
उस राह की रह्गीर  हो तुम|

सोचे थे जो ख़याल कभी
उन  ख़यालों  की तस्वीर  हो तुम|

जिसकी तलाश में मैं था कभी
वो खोयी जागीर  हो तुम|

थी आब जैसी साफ़  कभी
अब रूठी तक़दीर  हो तुम|

क्या था ग़लत 'रक़ीब'कभी 
जो एसी बेपीर  हो तुम|[/b]

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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2011, 05:38:04 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on December 28, 2011, 05:36:40 AM
good Applause Applause

Shukriya Adil Sahab!
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2011, 05:59:58 AM »
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Quote from: Raqeeb on December 28, 2011, 05:23:21 AM
देखे थे जो ख्वाब कभी
उन ख़्वाबों  की ताबीर हो तुम|

संग चलना था  जिस राह कभी
उस राह की रह्गीर  हो तुम|

सोचे थे जो ख़याल कभी
उन  ख़यालों  की तस्वीर  हो तुम|

जिसकी तलाश में मैं था कभी
वो खोयी जागीर  हो तुम|

थी आब जैसी साफ़  कभी
अब रूठी तक़दीर  हो तुम|

क्या था ग़लत 'रक़ीब'कभी 
जो एसी बेपीर  हो तुम|
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Bahut Khooooob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Ji!
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