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by ramspathak on August 18, 2013, 01:09:16 PM
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पहली बार मेरा दिल दर्द से भर आया,
उनके पास जब फरेब का खंज़र नज़र आया !

अब वे ही मेरे कातिल कहलायेंगे दोस्तों ,
जिनके लिए छोड़ मै अपना घर आया !

जिस्म ठंडा हुआ रूह भी कांप गयी ,
भूल कर बैठा जो इनके शहर आया !

ये सब देखकर मै पागल होने लगा
इनको कबसे ऐसा हुनर आया !!

राम शिरोमणि पाठक "दीपक"
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2013, 01:27:44 PM »
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पहली बार मेरा दिल दर्द से भर आया,
उनके पास जब फरेब का खंज़र नज़र आया !

अब वे ही मेरे कातिल कहलायेंगे दोस्तों ,
जिनके लिए छोड़ मै अपना घर आया !

जिस्म ठंडा हुआ रूह भी कांप गयी ,
भूल कर बैठा जो इनके शहर आया !

ये सब देखकर मै पागल होने लगा
इनको कबसे ऐसा हुनर आया !!

राम शिरोमणि पाठक "दीपक"
NICE
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2013, 01:28:33 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2013, 01:32:14 PM »
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पहली बार मेरा दिल दर्द से भर आया,
उनके पास जब फरेब का खंज़र नज़र आया !

अब वे ही मेरे कातिल कहलायेंगे दोस्तों ,
जिनके लिए छोड़ मै अपना घर आया !

जिस्म ठंडा हुआ रूह भी कांप गयी ,
भूल कर बैठा जो इनके शहर आया !

ये सब देखकर मै पागल होने लगा
इनको कबसे ऐसा हुनर आया !!

राम शिरोमणि पाठक "दीपक"
JISNE CHAHA MUJHE USE MEI CHOD AAYA
DHOKA MEINE AURO SE BAHUT HAI KHAYA

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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2013, 03:45:18 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2013, 01:56:13 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob..
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2013, 05:17:53 PM »
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bahut achha likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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