बनके रहनुमा मेरा, वो... ग़ुमनाम

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बनके रहनुमा मेरा, वो रास्ता दिखाता रहा,
थे बेख़बर, रहबर मन्ज़िल से भटकाता रहा,

करते रहे एतबार बड़े ही इतमीनान से हम,
वो कहानियों को किस्सों में उलझाता रहा,

करके यक़ीं वादों पे ज़िन्दगी लुटा दी उसने,
जो ज़माने से इश्क़ में मुझे बहकाता रहा,

यूँ तो पेशा न था ग़ज़ल लिखना मेरा कभी,
तेरी याद में मगर पेशेवर सा पेश आता रहा,

मेरे जज़्ब की भी इन्तहा कभी देखे ग़ुमनाम,
साहिल तड़पता रहा प्यासा, समन्दर तड़पाता रहा... ग़ुमनाम




Banke rehnuma mera, wo raasta dikhata raha,
The bekhabar, rehbar manzil se bhatkata raha,

Karte rahe aitbaar bade hi itminaan se ham,
Wo kahaniyon ko kisson me uljhata raha,

karke yakeen wadon pe zindagi luta di usne,
Jo zamane se ishq me mujhe behkata raha,


Yun to pesha na tha ghazal likhna mera kabhi,
Teri yaad me magar peshewar sa pesh aata raha,

Mere jazb ki bhi inteha kabhi dekhe Ghumnaam,
Saahil tadapta raha pyasa, samandar tadpaata raha... Ghumnaam
  
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2015, 10:39:59 AM »
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bahut bahut khub gumnaamji..... dil ko chhuti hui ghazal.....

ek rau qubul kijiye.....
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2015, 11:55:31 AM »
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behad khubsurat peshkash waaaaaaaahhhhh
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Quote from: mann.mann on July 03, 2015, 10:39:59 AM
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bahut bahut khub gumnaamji..... dil ko chhuti hui ghazal.....

ek rau qubul kijiye.....
bahut bahut shukriya mann ji... rau ke liye aapka tahedil se shukraguzaar hun...
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bahut bahut shukriya hriday ji...
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Quote from: jeet jainam on July 03, 2015, 11:55:31 AM
behad khubsurat peshkash waaaaaaaahhhhh
jeet ji bahut bahut shukriya janab...
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2015, 02:03:25 PM »
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Quote from: sanchit on July 03, 2015, 06:22:46 AM

बनके रहनुमा मेरा, वो रास्ता दिखाता रहा,
थे बेख़बर, रहबर मन्ज़िल से भटकाता रहा,

करते रहे एतबार बड़े ही इतमीनान से हम,
वो कहानियों को किस्सों में उलझाता रहा,

करके यक़ीं वादों पे ज़िन्दगी लुटा दी उसने,
जो ज़माने से इश्क़ में मुझे बहकाता रहा,

यूँ तो पेशा न था ग़ज़ल लिखना मेरा कभी,
तेरी याद में मगर पेशेवर सा पेश आता रहा,

मेरे जज़्ब की भी इन्तहा कभी देखे ग़ुमनाम,
साहिल तड़पता रहा प्यासा, समन्दर तड़पाता रहा... ग़ुमनाम




Banke rehnuma mera, wo raasta dikhata raha,
The bekhabar, rehbar manzil se bhatkata raha,

Karte rahe aitbaar bade hi itminaan se ham,
Wo kahaniyon ko kisson me uljhata raha,

karke yakeen wadon pe zindagi luta di usne,
Jo zamane se ishq me mujhe behkata raha,


Yun to pesha na tha ghazal likhna mera kabhi,
Teri yaad me magar peshewar sa pesh aata raha,

Mere jazb ki bhi inteha kabhi dekhe Ghumnaam,
Saahil tadapta raha pyasa, samandar tadpaata raha... Ghumnaam
 




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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2015, 10:09:34 PM »
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Quote from: sanchit on July 03, 2015, 06:22:46 AM

बनके रहनुमा मेरा, वो रास्ता दिखाता रहा,
थे बेख़बर, रहबर मन्ज़िल से भटकाता रहा,

करते रहे एतबार बड़े ही इतमीनान से हम,
वो कहानियों को किस्सों में उलझाता रहा,

करके यक़ीं वादों पे ज़िन्दगी लुटा दी उसने,
जो ज़माने से इश्क़ में मुझे बहकाता रहा,

यूँ तो पेशा न था ग़ज़ल लिखना मेरा कभी,
तेरी याद में मगर पेशेवर सा पेश आता रहा,

मेरे जज़्ब की भी इन्तहा कभी देखे ग़ुमनाम,
साहिल तड़पता रहा प्यासा, समन्दर तड़पाता रहा... ग़ुमनाम




Banke rehnuma mera, wo raasta dikhata raha,
The bekhabar, rehbar manzil se bhatkata raha,

Karte rahe aitbaar bade hi itminaan se ham,
Wo kahaniyon ko kisson me uljhata raha,

karke yakeen wadon pe zindagi luta di usne,
Jo zamane se ishq me mujhe behkata raha,


Yun to pesha na tha ghazal likhna mera kabhi,
Teri yaad me magar peshewar sa pesh aata raha,

Mere jazb ki bhi inteha kabhi dekhe Ghumnaam,
Saahil tadapta raha pyasa, samandar tadpaata raha... Ghumnaam
  


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यूँ तो पेशा न था ग़ज़ल लिखना मेरा कभी,
तेरी याद में मगर पेशेवर सा पेश आता रहा

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Umdaa.
ravindera ji shukriya...
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