मनाते-मनाते थका/Manaate-manaate thakaa..........................SAINI..

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अब लबों पर तराने  नहीं |

महफ़िलों  के ज़माने नहीं ||
 

गीत है,छंद  है ,है ग़ज़ल |

आज  इनके घराने  नहीं ||


चार  पैसे  हुए पास   में |

होश  मेरे  ठिकाने  नहीं ||
 

खाली बंगले पड़े  तो  कहीं |

लोग  हैं  आशियाने  नहीं ||
 

छोडिये  तीर  है  मेरा  सर |

और तो  कुछ निशाने  नहीं ||
 

मैं   मनाते - मनाते  थका |

आज  तक आप माने  नहीं ||
 

हाल ‘सैनी’ का क्या हो गया |

खाने को  चार   दाने  नहीं ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी


Ab  laboN  par  taraane naheeN.
MahfiloN  ke   zamaane  naheeN.

Geet hai,chhand hai,hai ghazal.
Aaj   inke   gharaane   naheeN.

Chaar   paise   hue  paas  meN.
Hosh   mere  thikaane   naheeN.

Khaalee  bangle pade to kaheeN.
Log   haiN  aashiyaane  naheeN.

Chhodiye  teer  hai  meraa sar.
Aur  to  kuchh nishaane naheeN.

MaiN  manaate-manaate   thakaa.
Aaj   tak  aap  maane   naheeN.

Haal ‘saini’ kaa kyaa ho gayaa.
Khaane  ko  chaar daane naheeN.

Dr.Surendra Saini  
 



 

 
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2012, 06:24:53 AM »
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Very Nice!  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2012, 06:53:59 AM »
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khub saini g very nice. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2012, 07:17:20 AM »
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Bahut hi Khoooooooooooooob Saini Jee. Dheron daad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2012, 07:21:24 AM »
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Bahut khub saini ji...... Lajawab peshkash......dhero daad aur khubsurat rachna ke liye cadbury se muh meetha bdhai bdhai
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2012, 07:50:25 AM »
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HAR BAAR KI TARAH BAHUT HI UMDA RACHNA SIR.
DAAD AUR 1 RAU AAPKI SEVA ME HAAZIR HAI
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«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2012, 07:52:09 AM »
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"char pese hue pass main
hosh mere thikhane nahi
khalli bangle pade to kahiin
log hain ashiyane nahiin""

kyab baat kahin hai sir.... mai har bar yehi baat sochta hun or apne yehi likh k mere dil ki bat cheen li

boht khoob ... lakhon daad jnab or ek rau   Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  icon_salut  icon_salut  icon_salut
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Saheb Aapka Naam Padhkar Hi Yeh yakeen Ho jaata Hai Ke Zabardast Ghazal Hi Likhi Hogi Aapne..Isme Koi Shak Ki Gunjayish Hi Nahi rehti...

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob!!!!!

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Bahut khoob Saini saheb . Daad ,is sher ke saath :


Baat   kuchh   hai  zuroor   aap  mein ,
Yoonhi   to    sab   Diwaane   naheeN
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
saini sahab bahut khubsurat gazal ke liye badhai
badhai humko bhi ki aisee gazal padne ko milee
ghansham das ahuja
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Great Sir
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Wow kya khoosurat khoobsurat si baate kahi hain aapne.
In my point of view this is a great composition.
So hamari mubarak baad or duwae kabool kijiye.
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Saini ji,....!!!
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