मनाते-मनाते थका/Manaate-manaate thakaa..........................SAINI..

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«Reply #15 on: June 08, 2012, 03:33:51 PM »
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very nice.saini ji apne
aaj kal ke halaat ko bakhoobi bayan kiya hai
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«Reply #16 on: June 09, 2012, 03:29:02 AM »
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«Reply #17 on: June 09, 2012, 03:38:12 AM »
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waaah janab waaah sidhe dil main utarti hai aapki rah ghazal.... khub

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«Reply #18 on: June 09, 2012, 05:26:23 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 08, 2012, 05:42:59 AM
अब लबों पर तराने  नहीं |

महफ़िलों  के ज़माने नहीं ||
 

गीत है,छंद  है ,है ग़ज़ल |

आज  इनके घराने  नहीं ||


चार  पैसे  हुए पास   में |

होश  मेरे  ठिकाने  नहीं ||
 

खाली बंगले पड़े  तो  कहीं |

लोग  हैं  आशियाने  नहीं ||
 

छोडिये  तीर  है  मेरा  सर |

और तो  कुछ निशाने  नहीं ||
 

मैं   मनाते - मनाते  थका |

आज  तक आप माने  नहीं ||
 

हाल ‘सैनी’ का क्या हो गया |

खाने को  चार   दाने  नहीं ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी


Ab  laboN  par  taraane naheeN.
MahfiloN  ke   zamaane  naheeN.

Geet hai,chhand hai,hai ghazal.
Aaj   inke   gharaane   naheeN.

Chaar   paise   hue  paas  meN.
Hosh   mere  thikaane   naheeN.

Khaalee  bangle pade to kaheeN.
Log   haiN  aashiyaane  naheeN.

Chhodiye  teer  hai  meraa sar.
Aur  to  kuchh nishaane naheeN.

MaiN  manaate-manaate   thakaa.
Aaj   tak  aap  maane   naheeN.

Haal ‘saini’ kaa kyaa ho gayaa.
Khaane  ko  chaar daane naheeN.

Dr.Surendra Saini 
 



 

 

awesome ,wah ji wah this is what a standard of RAU
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NAACHEEZ TO DIWANA HAI APKA.... AGE AUR KYA KAHOON
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«Reply #27 on: June 09, 2012, 01:56:32 PM »
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Saini Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab kia kahne ... bade hi taNz aur gehre khayaal kahe
haiN... Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
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