मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

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जिंदगी में जख्म ही जख्म मिले हर घड़ी
कभी भी कोई मरहम लगाने वाला नहीं मिला

तन्हा ही चलते ही रहे हर वक्त हर जगह
कभी भी कोई साथ निभाने वाला नहीं मिला

चाहत ही रह गयी कर जाऊं फ़ना खुद को
कभी भी कोई प्यार जताने वाला नहीं मिला

नहीं लगता "मीत" मिलेगा कब्र में भी आराम
कभी भी कोई मय्यत सजाने वाला नहीं मिला


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masoom shahjada

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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2012, 08:25:48 AM »

Etne sikwe achche nahi hote mere bhai...
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Thora sa to hamara dil rakh liya hota..
Mana ham aapke kaam kabhi nahi aaye par aapko pahle hame ahsas karana tha na baad me public karna tha....
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Wese aapki sayri ki baat kar to jabardast h...
Bhut dil ko choti huyi h....
Esliye hamari daad kabool kare


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2012, 10:09:39 AM »

bahut khoob


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2012, 10:19:59 AM »

Thanks a lot Masoom Ji, jab aapse milenge to saare shikve-shikaayat door kar lenge

Quote from: masoom shahjada on April 27, 2012, 08:25:48 AM


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2012, 10:27:25 AM »

Bahut khoob kaha Meet Ji, kaabil-e-daad

Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on April 27, 2012, 07:26:30 AM


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2012, 01:59:08 PM »

bahut bahut khoob Amit ji.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2012, 03:50:08 PM »

waaaaaaah waaaaaah amitjiii...bahut khoob....verrry good....bdiya....


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2012, 03:58:23 PM »

Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob LIkha hai

Think Positive ! Don't Loose hope !


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2012, 03:31:21 AM »

bahut khub meetji


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2012, 05:55:03 AM »

Thank you Saini Ji

Quote from: sksaini4 on April 27, 2012, 10:09:39 AM

bahut khoob


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2012, 10:02:28 AM »

Thanks a lot goldy ji

Quote from: goldy_shayar on April 27, 2012, 10:27:25 AM

Bahut khoob kaha Meet Ji, kaabil-e-daad


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2012, 06:29:52 PM »

Many many thanks Hriday Ji, God bless you

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 27, 2012, 01:59:08 PM

bahut bahut khoob Amit ji.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2012, 07:18:52 PM »

Thanks a lot Dolly Ji for your overwhelming quotes

Quote from: dolly on April 27, 2012, 03:50:08 PM

waaaaaaah waaaaaah amitjiii...bahut khoob....verrry good....bdiya....


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #13 on: April 29, 2012, 02:30:45 PM »

Many many thanks Nysha Ji, I always believe in positivity of life coz "WHAT EVER GOD DOES IS BETTERMENT FOR US"

Quote from: Nysha on April 27, 2012, 03:58:23 PM

Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob LIkha hai

Think Positive ! Don't Loose hope !


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Re: मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2012, 06:58:08 AM »

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