मेरे ख्वाबों में जब - By "Betaab".

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मेरे ख्वाबों में जब वो आये होंगे,
मुझको एकदम तनहा पाये होंगे.

मेरे ख्वाबों की दहलीच पर अचानक,
उनके क़दम जरूर डगमगाए होंगे.

मुझको बर्बाद होता देखकर न जाने क्यों,
मन ही मन में जरूर मुस्कराये होंगे.

रूबरू मिलने की उनमें हिम्मत कहाँ,
इसीलिए नींद में मुझको सताने आये होंगे.

मुझको तवाह करके भी वो संतुष्ट नहीं,
तभी तो रक़ीबों को घर मेरा दिखाने आये होंगे.

मेरी बर्बाद मोहब्बत की बरसी पर "बेताब",
अपने घर में घी के चिराग जलाये होंगे.

  Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".
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वाह.....बहुत खूब......
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2014, 06:54:46 AM »
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बहुत खूब  Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower

जब तक जिन्दा थी मेरे दहलीज पर न आये होगे
मेरे मरने के बाद ही मेरा जनाजा उठाने आये होगे
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2014, 09:04:44 AM »
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Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on August 21, 2014, 03:36:29 AM
मेरे ख्वाबों में जब वो आये होंगे,
मुझको एकदम तनहा पाये होंगे.

मेरे ख्वाबों की दहलीच पर अचानक,
उनके क़दम जरूर डगमगाए होंगे.

मुझको बर्बाद होता देखकर न जाने क्यों,
मन ही मन में जरूर मुस्कराये होंगे.

रूबरू मिलने की उनमें हिम्मत कहाँ,
इसीलिए नींद में मुझको सताने आये होंगे.

मुझको तवाह करके भी वो संतुष्ट नहीं,
तभी तो रक़ीबों को घर मेरा दिखाने आये होंगे.

मेरी बर्बाद मोहब्बत की बरसी पर "बेताब",
अपने घर में घी के चिराग जलाये होंगे.

  Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".

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वाह.....बहुत खूब......

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Bahut Khoob khyal hai. Applause Applause Applause

So Many Thanks to You Sir.
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मेरे ख्वाबों में जब वो आये होंगे,
मुझको एकदम तनहा पाये होंगे.

मेरे ख्वाबों की  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smiledahleez    Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile पर अचानक,
उनके क़दम जरूर डगमगाए होंगे.

मुझको बर्बाद होता देखकर न जाने क्यों,
मन ही मन में जरूर मुस्कराये होंगे.

रूबरू मिलने की उनमें हिम्मत कहाँ,
इसीलिए नींद में मुझको सताने आये होंगे.

मुझको तवाह करके भी वो संतुष्ट नहीं,
तभी तो रक़ीबों को घर मेरा दिखाने आये होंगे.

मेरी बर्बाद मोहब्बत की बरसी पर "बेताब",
अपने घर में घी के चिराग जलाये होंगे.

  Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".
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Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on August 21, 2014, 06:54:46 AM
बहुत खूब  Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower

जब तक जिन्दा थी मेरे दहलीज पर न आये होगे
मेरे मरने के बाद ही मेरा जनाजा उठाने आये होगे

So Many Thanks to You Sir. Additional lines ke liye alag se Shukriya. Lines achchhi lagi.
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