लो उठा लिया है जाम फिर मैंने gazal

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YE GHAZAL AAPKI NAZAR
GHAZAL
MATRA( 2121,2121,222) FAAILAAT

LO UTHA LIYA HAI JAAM FIR MAINE
TOD DI KASMEIN TAMAAM FIR MAINE

JAAN LENGE WO DARDE DIL KI WAJAH
CHHODA HAI KHAT ME PYAAM FIR MAINE

DIL HAI MERA KYON KISI KO DE DUN
KAR DIYA SABKO SLAAM FIR MAINE

MILTI HAI RAAHAT TO WAJIB PINA
KAR DIYA KHUDKO GULAAM FIR MAINE

MAIN KAHIN BHI HUN LAPTA AB NAHI
RAKH DIYA KHUDPE INAAM FIR MAINE

DIL KI TAKHTI PE PIGHLI KALAM SE
LIKHA HAI JALTA KLAAM FIR MAINE

KOUN ZINDA HAI SITAMGAR YEH BTAA
CHHODI HAI LAASH BENAAM FIR MAINE

AARZOO BHATKTA FIR RAHA HAI YAHAN
PAAYA HAI KAISA MOKAAM FIR MAINE.

ग़ज़ल
मात्रा ( 2121 2121 222 )
फाइलात

लो उठा लिया है जाम फिर मैंने
तोड़ दी कसमें तमाम फिर मैंने

मिलती है राहत तो वाजिब पीना
कर दिया खुदको गुलाम फिर मैंने

जान लेंगें वो दर्दे दिल की वज़ह
छोड़ा है ख़त में पयाम फिर मैंने

दिल है मेरा क्यों किसी को दे दूँ
कर दिया सबको सलाम फिर मैंने

मैं कहीं भी हूँ लापता अब नहीं
रखा है खुद पे इनाम फिर मैंने

दिल की तख्ती पे पिघली कलम से
लिखा है जलता कलाम फिर मैंने

कौन ज़िंदा है सितमगर यह बता
छोड़ी है लाश बेनाम फिर मैंने

आरज़ू भटकता फिरता है यहाँ
पाया है कैसा मोकाम फिर मैंने

आरज़ू-ए-अर्जुन





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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2016, 05:51:07 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2016, 08:46:50 PM »
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waah waah bahut hee umdah, dheron daad.
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2016, 04:54:40 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2016, 06:36:20 AM »
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Shukriya surinder sir..
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Bahot achey  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: March 21, 2016, 03:46:17 PM »
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Shukriya surinder sir..
Arey bhaai mujhe nahin Maayaa ko kaho unh kaa kehna hai ke tumhaari poem iss too good. Just a laugh.
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«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2016, 09:49:22 PM »
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Quote from: aarzoo-e-arjun on March 20, 2016, 12:57:01 PM
YE GHAZAL AAPKI NAZAR
GHAZAL
MATRA( 2121,2121,222) FAAILAAT

LO UTHA LIYA HAI JAAM FIR MAINE
TOD DI KASMEIN TAMAAM FIR MAINE

waise sharaabi ki ye sab se badi khaasiyat hoti hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

JAAN LENGE WO DARD-E- DIL KI WAJAH
CHHODA HAI KHAT ME PYAAM FIR MAINE
koi bhi khat nahin pahuchaa mere paas ab tak khudaa khair kare icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!


DIL HAI MERA KYON KISI KO DE DUN
KAR DIYA SABKO SLAAM FIR MAINE

ye to bus kahne wali baat hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

MILTI HAI RAAHAT TO WAJIB PINA
KAR DIYA KHUDKO GULAAM FIR MAINE

apne wajood ko bachaa kar rakho!
zindagi me.n usoolo.n ko sajaa kar rakho!!

MAIN KAHIN BHI HUN LAPTA AB NAHI
RAKH DIYA KHUDPE INAAM FIR MAINE

Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard kyaa khoob likha hai!

DIL KI TAKHTI PE PIGHLI KALAM SE
LIKHA HAI JALTA KLAAM FIR MAINE
waah ji waah dikh rahaa hai aag hi aag hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

KOUN ZINDA HAI SITAMGAR YEH BTAA
CHHODI HAI LAASH BENAAM FIR MAINE

bahut pyaraa sher hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

AARZOO BHATKTA FIR RAHA HAI YAHAN
PAAYA HAI KAISA MOKAAM FIR MAINE.

bahut khoob ji waah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

ग़ज़ल
मात्रा ( 2121 2121 222 )
फाइलात

लो उठा लिया है जाम फिर मैंने
तोड़ दी कसमें तमाम फिर मैंने

मिलती है राहत तो वाजिब पीना
कर दिया खुदको गुलाम फिर मैंने

जान लेंगें वो दर्दे दिल की वज़ह
छोड़ा है ख़त में पयाम फिर मैंने

दिल है मेरा क्यों किसी को दे दूँ
कर दिया सबको सलाम फिर मैंने

मैं कहीं भी हूँ लापता अब नहीं
रखा है खुद पे इनाम फिर मैंने

दिल की तख्ती पे पिघली कलम से
लिखा है जलता कलाम फिर मैंने

कौन ज़िंदा है सितमगर यह बता
छोड़ी है लाश बेनाम फिर मैंने

आरज़ू भटकता फिरता है यहाँ
पाया है कैसा मोकाम फिर मैंने

आरज़ू-ए-अर्जुन









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