हमारी बात उन्हें इतनी नागवार लगी

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हमारी बात उन्हें इतनी नागवार लगी
गुलों की बात छिड़ी और उनको खार लगी
बहुत संभाल के हमने रखे थे पाँव मगर
जहां थे जख्म वहीं चोट बार-बार लगी
कदम कदम पे हिदायत मिली सफर में हमें
कदम कदम पे हमें ज़िंदगी उधार लगी
नहीं थी कद्र कभी मेरी हसरतों की उसे
ये और बात कि अब वो भी बेकरार लगी
मदद के हांथ नहीं एक भी उठे थे मगर
अजीब दौर कि बस भीड़ बेशुमार लगी
.....sanju shabdita .....
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2014, 10:03:34 PM »
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Beintehaayee khoobsurat ghazal. Behad lutf aur sukoon mila padh kar.
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2014, 11:18:28 PM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on May 24, 2014, 09:41:16 PM
हमारी बात उन्हें इतनी नागवार लगी
गुलों की बात छिड़ी और उनको खार लगी
बहुत संभाल के हमने रखे थे पाँव मगर
जहां थे जख्म वहीं चोट बार-बार लगी
कदम कदम पे हिदायत मिली सफर में हमें
कदम कदम पे हमें ज़िंदगी उधार लगी
नहीं थी कद्र कभी मेरी हसरतों की उसे
ये और बात कि अब वो भी बेकरार लगी
मदद के हांथ नहीं एक भी उठे थे मगर
अजीब दौर कि बस भीड़ बेशुमार लगी
.....sanju shabdita .....


naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2014, 01:14:55 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bohut umda waaaaaaahhhhhhhh daaaaaaadd
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2014, 01:34:05 AM »
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waahh wahh
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2014, 08:18:08 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2014, 06:36:34 PM »
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 Bahu khoobsoorat.. Applause :clap Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2014, 09:37:09 PM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal...
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2014, 10:31:46 PM »
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क्या बात है,,,,,बहुत खूब.!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 26, 2014, 02:11:50 PM »
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हमारी बात उन्हें इतनी नागवार लगी
गुलों की बात छिड़ी और उनको खार लगी
बहुत संभाल के हमने रखे थे पाँव मगर
जहां थे जख्म वहीं चोट बार-बार लगी
कदम कदम पे हिदायत मिली सफर में हमें
कदम कदम पे हमें ज़िंदगी उधार लगी
नहीं थी कद्र कभी मेरी हसरतों की उसे
ये और बात कि अब वो भी बेकरार लगी
मदद के हांथ नहीं एक भी उठे थे मगर
अजीब दौर कि बस भीड़ बेशुमार लगी
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
iss behtareen peshkash par ek rau kubool karein
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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2014, 05:19:46 PM »
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Quote from: zarraa on May 24, 2014, 10:03:34 PM
Beintehaayee khoobsurat ghazal. Behad lutf aur sukoon mila padh kar.
sukriya zarraa ji
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 24, 2014, 11:18:28 PM

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice
tah dil se sukriya khamosh ji
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Quote from: jeet jainam on May 25, 2014, 01:14:55 AM
Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bohut umda waaaaaaahhhhhhhh daaaaaaadd
Aap ka bahut bahut sukriya jeet ji
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«Reply #13 on: June 02, 2014, 05:21:30 PM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on May 25, 2014, 01:34:05 AM
waahh wahh
tah dil se sukriya rajan ji
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Quote from: sksaini4 on May 25, 2014, 08:18:08 AM
waah waah bahut khoob
SK saini ji aap ka bahut bahut sukriya
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