हशर:the day of judgement

by sanjayudas on January 25, 2013, 12:40:09 PM
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घुँघराली ज़ुल्फ़ेँ हुईँ जो चंचल,
घटा को थोड़ी परवाह मिली,
तुम्हारी आमद से सब है बदला,
अंधे को यूँ कि सुबह मिली,
वो बेचैनी अपनी छिपा न पायी,
बिस्तर पे सिलवट गवाह मिली,
दामन छुआ तो एहसास महके,
हुई क़यामत जो निग़ाह मिली,
तड़पे थे जिसकी आरज़ू मेँ,
वो मिली तो मुझसे बेपरवाह मिली,
मुहब्बत होती तो ग़म न होता,
इतनी सज़ा बेवज़ह मिली,
इतनी सज़ा.............
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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2013, 12:43:19 PM »
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bahoot bahoot khoob sanjay ji excellent creation dheero daad...
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2013, 12:47:29 PM »
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घुँघराली ज़ुल्फ़ेँ हुईँ जो चंचल,
घटा को थोड़ी परवाह मिली,
तुम्हारी आमद से सब है बदला,
अंधे को यूँ कि सुबह मिली,
वो बेचैनी अपनी छिपा न पायी,
बिस्तर पे सिलवट गवाह मिली,
दामन छुआ तो एहसास महके,
हुई क़यामत जो निग़ाह मिली,
तड़पे थे जिसकी आरज़ू मेँ,
वो मिली तो मुझसे बेपरवाह मिली,
मुहब्बत होती तो ग़म न होता,
इतनी सज़ा बेवज़ह मिली,
इतनी सज़ा.............

wah wah bahut acha likha hai aapne sanjay jee.
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2013, 01:24:09 PM »
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kya baat hai Sanjay ji... bahut hi khoob..
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«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2013, 01:25:21 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2013, 01:50:53 PM »
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घुँघराली ज़ुल्फ़ेँ हुईँ जो चंचल,
घटा को थोड़ी परवाह मिली,
तुम्हारी आमद से सब है बदला,
अंधे को यूँ कि सुबह मिली,
वो बेचैनी अपनी छिपा न पायी,
बिस्तर पे सिलवट गवाह मिली,
दामन छुआ तो एहसास महके,
हुई क़यामत जो निग़ाह मिली,
तड़पे थे जिसकी आरज़ू मेँ,
वो मिली तो मुझसे बेपरवाह मिली,
मुहब्बत होती तो ग़म न होता,
इतनी सज़ा बेवज़ह मिली,
इतनी सज़ा.............


splendid,sir
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«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2013, 03:15:20 PM »
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great composition
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2013, 01:43:29 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: January 26, 2013, 08:38:46 AM »
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Sanjay Jee Aadaab!


Kia kahne janab waaH bade hi tez aur umdaa khayaal baNd kiye
hai aapne... Usual Smile

sabhi ashaar khoob rahe... Usual Smile
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..


Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: January 28, 2013, 09:44:18 AM »
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very nice
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