Aa jao ki ab in aankhon main barsaat utarti jati hai - SARVESH RASTOGI

by SARVESH RASTOGI on April 27, 2009, 05:38:42 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 29, 2009, 04:55:01 PM »
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Thanks Sophi
Thanks for the encouragement
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«Reply #16 on: April 30, 2009, 01:42:46 PM »
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HELLO ANGEL JI SHUKRIYA
AAPKE AUR AAPKE JAISE DOOSARE EXPERT SHAYARON AUR SHAYARAON KE AANE SE MERI POETRY KO MAJBOOT SUPPORT MILA HAI.  KRAPAYA ISI PRAKAR MEHARBANI BANAYE RAKHEN.  MAIN APNE PATHAKON KA TAHE-DIL SE SHUKRAGUZAR HUN.
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«Reply #17 on: May 01, 2009, 09:45:32 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 29, 2009, 04:38:38 PM
Wow very romantically expressed lines. Good work Sarvesh ji.  Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #18 on: May 05, 2009, 04:35:59 AM »
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«Reply #19 on: May 19, 2009, 01:15:53 AM »
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«Reply #20 on: May 19, 2009, 01:28:59 AM »
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Shukriya Roja Ji
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Welcome Sarvesh Rastogi ji. sahi mein bahut khoob likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #21 on: May 20, 2009, 03:44:44 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 28, 2009, 06:57:55 AM
Wah wah kya baat hain itnaaaaaaaaaa Romantic geet Sarvesh sab khairiyat to hain..... Winking

Tum nam hamara le le kar.... yeh pankhti mujhe bohat achchi lagiiiiiiiii isme shokhi bhi hain aur shikayat bhi. Bohat bohat khoob.......Dad kabool ho.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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TAMAM UMRA TERA INTAZAR KAR LANGE
MAGAR YE RANJ RAHEGA KI ZINDAGI KAM HAI

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«Reply #22 on: June 11, 2009, 02:19:43 PM »
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How beautiful sarvesh ji
very nice
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«Reply #23 on: July 08, 2009, 04:46:09 PM »
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आ जाओ की अब इन आँखों में बरसात उतरती जाती है
अरमान भरा ये दिल है पिया और रात गुज़रती जाती है

तुम नाम हमारा ले-लेकर रंगीन फ़साने यूँ न कहो
माना की ये किस्से सच ही सही पर बात बिगड़ती जाती है

घूँघट न उठा नज़रें न मिलीं बंधन न खुले दो तन न मिले
ये सेज की चादर हाय सनम बिन बात सिकुड़ती जाती है

बेताब निगाहें बेबस हैं दरवाजे की खामोशी पे
जाती हुई घडियां धड़कन को कुछ और बढ़ाती जाती हैं

चूड़ी की खनक पायल की झनक चहरे की चमक साँसों की महक
महबूब तुम्हारे प्यार बिना सजधज भी नहीं सुहाती है

सर्वेश रस्तोगी
sarveshrastogi1960@yahoo.co.uk
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«Reply #24 on: July 09, 2009, 07:25:47 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 08, 2009, 04:46:09 PM

आ जाओ की अब इन आँखों में बरसात उतरती जाती है
अरमान भरा ये दिल है पिया और रात गुज़रती जाती है

तुम नाम हमारा ले-लेकर रंगीन फ़साने यूँ न कहो
माना की ये किस्से सच ही सही पर बात बिगड़ती जाती है

घूँघट न उठा नज़रें न मिलीं बंधन न खुले दो तन न मिले
ये सेज की चादर हाय सनम बिन बात सिकुड़ती जाती है

बेताब निगाहें बेबस हैं दरवाजे की खामोशी पे
जाती हुई घडियां धड़कन को कुछ और बढ़ाती जाती हैं

चूड़ी की खनक पायल की झनक चहरे की चमक साँसों की महक
महबूब तुम्हारे प्यार बिना सजधज भी नहीं सुहाती है

सर्वेश रस्तोगी
sarveshrastogi1960@yahoo.co.uk
Ati sundar hai yah shabd-sanrachnaa sarveshrastogi ji!
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«Reply #25 on: July 09, 2009, 02:38:15 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 09, 2009, 07:25:47 AM
Ati sundar hai yah shabd-sanrachnaa sarveshrastogi ji!
     - abd bundeli

Khushnasibi hamari Bundeli Saheb ki aapne apni buland kalam se hamari rachna ki tarif likhi.  Bahut bahut shukriya.  Kripaya hausla badhate rahiye.  Thanks again.
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«Reply #26 on: July 09, 2009, 04:04:26 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 09, 2009, 02:38:15 PM
Khushnasibi hamari Bundeli Saheb ki aapne apni buland kalam se hamari rachna ki tarif likhi.  Bahut bahut shukriya.  Kripaya hausla badhate rahiye.  Thanks again.
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Rastogi ji! You're most welcome!
Meiney pahiley kabhi aapko padhney kaa 'soubhaagya' praapt nahin kiyaa thaa! Aap to khaasey achchhey shaayar hain janaab! Mujhey khushee huyee, ki, mein aap ko padh paayaa! 70 kaa hun, aankhoun ko kam 'stress' deytaa hun, taa ki, aisey khoobsoorat kalaamoun ko padhtey rahney key qaabil banaa rahoon!
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«Reply #27 on: July 09, 2009, 04:29:50 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 09, 2009, 02:46:09 PM
Applause Applause Applause
bahot bahot khoob likha hai aapne Sarvesh ji

behad achi kavita

Bahut bahut shukriya Kaash Ji
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«Reply #28 on: July 10, 2009, 10:30:47 AM »
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Respected Bundeli Saheb
Bahut bahut shukriya.  Aap bahut senior shayar hain, aapki seniority ko salaam karta hun. icon_salut
Aapki ghazalen mujhe badi pasand aati hain, jab bhi mauka lagta hai padhta hun aur reply bhi karta hun.  Wakai aapne literature ki badi sewa ki hai.
Aapki achchhi sehat ki dua karta hun.
Regards.
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«Reply #29 on: July 10, 2009, 12:04:30 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 10, 2009, 10:30:47 AM
Respected Bundeli Saheb
Bahut bahut shukriya.  Aap bahut senior shayar hain, aapki seniority ko salaam karta hun. icon_salut
Aapki ghazalen mujhe badi pasand aati hain, jab bhi mauka lagta hai padhta hun aur reply bhi karta hun.  Wakai aapne literature ki badi sewa ki hai.
Aapki achchhi sehat ki dua karta hun.
Regards.
SARVESH RASTOGI
Thanks a lot for all of your so kind words! Dear Rastogi ji, my best wishes are always with you! May HE guide you to new heights of achievements!
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