aadhuri kalpana

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 tere dil ko bechain kar ke guzrega,
 wo har paigaam mera hoga...

   laakh bulayega par bhool na payega,
   wo kissa subah shaam mera hoga...

     jab bhi dhundhega ayine mai vajood apna,
     wo chehra jo nazar aayega mera hoga...

       toot ke jab bhi uthayega jaam apne haatho mai,
       wo jo lab pe ayega "ADHURA" sa naam mera hoga.
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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2012, 09:04:34 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2012, 09:07:35 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 01, 2012, 09:33:36 AM »
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Quote from: adhuri kalpana on November 01, 2012, 09:01:54 AM

 tere dil ko bechain kar ke guzrega,
 wo har paigaam mera hoga...

   laakh bulayega par bhool na payega,
   wo kissa subah shaam mera hoga...

     jab bhi dhundhega ayine mai vajood apna,
     wo chehra jo nazar aayega mera hoga...

       toot ke jab bhi uthayega jaam apne haatho mai,
       wo jo lab pe ayega "ADHURA" sa naam mera hoga.

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«Reply #4 on: November 01, 2012, 11:50:30 AM »
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Tah dil se swagat hain apka Yoindia shayaribadab me .........

Aur apka tarruf bahut khoob,,,,,,,,zabardst .......
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«Reply #5 on: November 01, 2012, 12:58:17 PM »
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zindagi jeene ka hunar khud hi se sikha hai,
ab waqt fursat ka hai ,to fhir sochna kaisa Usual Smile
dhanyawad masoom ji aapke  warm welcome ke liye.
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«Reply #6 on: November 01, 2012, 01:00:57 PM »
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SK SAINI JI THANK U SO MUCH Usual Smile

QALB JI DHANYAWAD Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: November 01, 2012, 01:04:49 PM »
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i like ur words kaushal ji  thank u Usual Smile

koi yaad kare na kare kya farak padta hai,
zinda rehne ke liye ab meri tanhayi hi kaafi hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: November 01, 2012, 01:23:24 PM »
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Quote from: adhuri kalpana on November 01, 2012, 01:04:49 PM
i like ur words kaushal ji  thank u Usual Smile

koi yaad kare na kare kya farak padta hai,
zinda rehne ke liye ab meri tanhayi hi kaafi hai Usual Smile

Sorry my comment some word mistake so now correction have a done. Thank u

Behad shandaar likhte hain aap....

Kabhi gham na karna ye tanhayi dil_e_ wafadar hoti hain,
Jab chhod dete hain saath apne to yahi hai woh jo hume panah deti hain...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: November 01, 2012, 03:46:19 PM »
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ye khubsurat aagaaz dil ko choo gaya,
ab jo v hoga anjaam, teraa hoga...

likhte rahiye....
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«Reply #10 on: November 02, 2012, 01:01:16 PM »
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bahut khoob kaushal ji umeed karti hu apko meri baaki shyari bhi pasand aaye Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: November 02, 2012, 01:01:59 PM »
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ghayal ji thank u ... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: November 03, 2012, 02:00:47 AM »
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Quote from: adhuri kalpana on November 01, 2012, 09:01:54 AM

 tere dil ko bechain kar ke guzrega,
 wo har paigaam mera hoga...

   laakh bulayega par bhool na payega,
   wo kissa subah shaam mera hoga...

     jab bhi dhundhega ayine mai vajood apna,
     wo chehra jo nazar aayega mera hoga...

       toot ke jab bhi uthayega jaam apne haatho mai,
       wo jo lab pe ayega "ADHURA" sa naam mera hoga.

shandar introduction. har ek alfaz mein dard hai. bahut acha likha hai. welcome to yoindia.
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«Reply #13 on: November 15, 2012, 08:56:07 AM »
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Vo khwaab, vo naam, vo jaam jo ab tak adhoora hoga,
mujhe yaqeen hai mere dost, woh ab poora hoga !!
 
Khushaamdeed !! icon_flower
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