aaj fir akele mein

by aru12 on February 17, 2013, 04:21:03 AM
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Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...

Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...

Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...

ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....


Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....


Aansuon se mere,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....


Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....
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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2013, 04:52:36 AM »
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Quote from: aru12 on February 17, 2013, 04:21:03 AM
Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...

Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...

Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...

ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....


Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....


Aansuon se mere,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....


Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....
Nice line ji
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2013, 05:23:34 AM »
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just  beautiful . keepit up , friend .
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Baht khoob nazm
daad kbul karie janaab

aate rahie
likhte rahe
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boht khub kaha apne aru ji
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Bahut bahut khoob
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on February 17, 2013, 04:52:36 AM
Nice line ji
Thanx rajan jee.......
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 17, 2013, 05:23:34 AM
just  beautiful . keepit up , friend .
Thanx f.h.siddi jee....
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thanx s k saini jee....
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